did you keep reading? and if so, do the translations get better?
Yes, reading this has also made me smarter
Does the mc actually die?
I really want to know, what happened near ch. 230~~250 that many chapters don't have paragraphs? Can this be solved?
Can you update more chapters per week
I want jing ze back as the head of the gu family
Huh, that's the end?
So here's my review!
Strengths:
- Engaging post-apocalyptic world with OGI powers and hierarchy.
- Action-packed scenes that keep readers hooked.
- Superhuman abilities of the protagonist add excitement.
- Mysterious characters like Mr. Mink create intrigue.
- Flashback scene provides insight and hints at a larger story.
Areas for improvement:
- Abrupt transitions between scenes.
- Pacing issues in certain areas.
- Dialogue could be improved for better engagement.
Overall, the story has potential with its engaging world, thrilling action, and mysterious characters. However, addressing the issues of transitions, clarity, pacing, and dialogue would enhance the reading experience. With these improvements, the story could become even more captivating and leave readers eagerly anticipating future chapters.
quality of translation dropped/ different translator after ch 40
The story starts off very interesting ,but thats it.the main character is kind of a beta with no spine or control over his own life.its a harem in name only because the women run his life with no actual relations
Can not tell if it was dropped or if the author has other real life issues preventing the novel from continuing for now. But the book is really good and has great character and world development so far.
One thing Is very clear about this novel. The author put a lot of work in it & did his research which is much appreciated. But 2 things I didn't like about this novel that caused me to ultimately drop it after 110 chapters.1. the story is too linear & there are rarely any twists. this makes the novel boring.2. the MC is a hypocrite & nothing special about him.