Important notice!!!I'm Asian who is trying to write in English. There will be mistakes and errors. So bear with me. If you see mistakes, let me know please.***
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Sold sold sold!!!! Starting today you will be receiving my stones exclusively. This novel has everything :Reincarnation √Game system √Awsome hook √Swords and magic √Pyscho God √I can go on and on! Keep it coming buddy ill plug your work and throw stones and hope you get up there in the ranking. Finally a great original is here.
I lost interest after it was mentioned all these thousands of races were summoned from their worlds to wage wars, sigh. This genre is really low effort, I'd read something like this as normal world setting that MC transmigrates into. Without all these 2d characters, repetitive systems etc.
Few years ago, I was fascinated with a story written on wattpad same like this one. And finally I'm happy to find and able to read your novel. It is true indeed, i agree with other comments, i also found myself can't wait for the next update. I would like to say, thank you to the author for having such creative mind by creating and writing a fascinating, spectacular, one of a kind story.Though, it's grammar is not perfectly written or should i say it's translation, but still doesn't affect how good the story is.To readers out there:Once you start reading even though you find some errors with the grammars or english terms, just take it low, and try to understand it more, and not be affected with it. Because it is really good. Though a lot of characters are there, you might find it confusing at some point, but i guarantee you will not be wasting your time reading this.As long as.......You love adventure, you're not conservative and open minded...You would like to imagine and patiently understand about the "spiritual power" thing.
The stakes in this chapter are layered like an onion and I mean that in the best way. On the surface, you've got the academic stakes: three years to awaken or get expelled. That's a deadline, and deadlines create tension. But then the author adds a second layer: the Cinderleaf Planet Transcendents are already here, already enrolled, and already at Rank Three while our heroes are at zero. That's not just a threat; that's a humiliation. These kids were invaded, their planet was punished, and now the invaders are sitting in the same classroom as them, already powerful. The personal stakes for Su Xi are even more interesting because her conflict is internal. She couldn't find anything in her Consciousness Sea for days. She's been pretending. And now she has to admit that maybe her power isn't what she thought it was—or maybe it's something entirely different. The line 'What if she wanted to break the norm?' is chilling because it suggests Su Xi might not be a hero in the traditional sense. She might be someone who changes the rules. And that's the highest stakes of all: not just surviving three years, not just defeating the Cinderleaf threat, but redefining what it means to be a Transcendent. The author doesn't spell any of this out explicitly, which is why it works. The tension isn't in dramatic declarations; it's in the silence after Captain Lyu says 'our most important task is to awaken,' and then all those eyes turn to Su Xi, who has been sitting there with nothing to contribute. That silence is heavier than any threat. It's the weight of expectation, fear, and the terrifying possibility that she might actually be the key to everything.
Well one of the best novel i ever read!!Please keep updating the novel author.
Your English is good but the crafting is not on the level, I reckon you study a few like viewpoint, Show not tell, and do mind to keep an eye for the little things that may not seem important as it sometimes sets off the readers.Your main problem I notice reading the first three chapter is that the viewpoint is wrong. it's much like an omniscient telling a story he knows everything about. You should change that to 1st or 3rd person omniscient.and Show don't tell, all the aspiring author get through this, I myself was an example. I fixed this problem through revising as I'm not still good enough to follow.that's all my personal thoughts reading the first 3 chapters. Good Day.
Hello, readers! It's me. I want to apologize for not uploading these days. It's just...my laziness took over and also the fact that translating other author's book made me feel demotivated. Well.. I didn't realize the fact that I've been doing this because I enjoyed translating it! Of cause reading your comments makes me laugh so hard! Thank you, original author "Half pot of sake" for making such a good novel. I will try my best to learn how to write while translating! Have a nice day everyone!
Amazing story so far! It hasn't progressed that much(Ch 16 as of now) but I can't wait for the next update! Now you need more power stones and readers then more updates.
the story is nice just some uncomfortable scene and my heart ache every now and then also i don't like having the main girl not a virgin just my opinion though maybe just the influence of betrayal part that's why i don't like the mc having a girl who already experience the forbidden fruit of love making so maybe if you add some potential wifu candidate and a virgin at that(my bias) my heart might finally come in peace and remove the pain that plaguing my heart
it was good until bro basically NTR'ED his future alpha, like damn dude, you made me regret reading this.