WynneRee
wanted to see children or sum, did she even want children?
My condolences, but enjoy the book.
Thanks for suggestions. I will check it out and I think this is the one.😀👍
Still, all you do is drink something and, voula, no matter your previous rank, now you are pseudo-divine?
Bruh I finished reading but this isn't complete
the only reason i'm reading this is cause the desc says the mc is blind and i've never read a novel where the mc was blind, in plenty of other novels you can see sword cultivators who are blind and they cover their eyes but never a mc who's blind so i have expectationsedit: fuck yeah the main character is blindedit: fuck no the main character is no longer blind by chapter 3, what the fuck well here's hoping the mc loses his eyesight cause that was the only reason i was hereedit: he still has his eyes after 83 chapters since he got them back, its sad but the author even made a plot device recently about his eyes so the description is a lie and the mc is not a blind dual cultivator unless he becomes blind again but that's about as likely as....waking up one day and you've become a biological humanoid perpetual motion machine(immortal)
Novel is ended?
So far so good. I like the story thus far....just waiting for the updates. do do do do do.... twiddling thumbs :-| chapter 432... where's the rest?
The novel's plot is innovative, combining elements of apocalypse survival and harem building, which attracts me who enjoy both genres.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is my favorite novel in the app, I've been reading it for months now since I got here and I love it. I love everything, I love Natasha, I love Chaos, I love Val, I grew to love daddy Gilbert, I love Theo, I love Ash, and I also hate a load of people here, and I feel for Nat. I have sooooo many theories, good lord, so many it's insane, and I can't wait for the timeskip because I just know we'll get most of them after it. It's really entertaining and engaging, and especially now that Ann added the character designs, which help imagining them better. I can't wait for more, and I'm glad you're back fron hiatus!
8 parts romance 2 parts story.Story started off really well, but eventually turned into a novel where MC turns out to be a flirtatious Alpha who can't keep it in his pants.MC joins the army but unlike what you'd expect, the new recruit is given an unlimited amount of freedom to do whatever he wants. It doesn't feel like the army at all and instead feels like a summer camp for teens with pent up hormones. Every new recruit in the army is thinking about hooking up with each other. There's no regulations at all.Up until the first new planet the story is pretty good. MC finds his soulmate and everything seems like as long as they can stay together everything will work out one way or another. Author does find a way to tear them apart though and what does MC do first once they're apart? Find another girl. The rebound was insanely fast. After that girl, he gets another girl, and once he drops that girl he gets another. This is all while comparing the new girls to the first one that he's still in love with. It's just a complete mess. The excuse was that he has his own urges and is really just looking for someone to satisfy them. It really doesn't help that every attractive girl he comes across instantly falls for him. I dropped around chapter 400 since it wasn't going anywhere else.
I really wish a few things were different.I like this novel, but it sorely lacks detail. Every arc doesn’ get fleshed out enough. Like when first visiting the origin native city I wish it had a few whole chapters on the atmosphere, markets, shops, people and shopping and trading things. Then a whole arc on the different market oppor tunities that the city and the human world that he can use to gain money and trade deals.The worst part of the novel is the mc’s subjects, every single detail that would build up a relationship or positive image of the lord is missing.. instead it’s all the lord is soo nice (just continually says this in differnt ways, instead of mc doing something that would actually make it true)Him selling his perfectly extracted stuff to only one shop was senseless. I really wish it had a arc about shopping around and making trade deals, instead of just one shop and no negotiation. This gets even worse though with the selling of blueprints, which gets worse again with the “negotiation” that happens for the first time.Honestly though it’s a perfect framework to write an amazing book, but it’s missing the details and context… rather just writes summaries for most things.
