The things the Author said he was going to write in this is not okay. Nobody want to read about Rape and other ugly sides of society, We come to read and get away from reality.
Definitely a strange one, this is probably a book I'll remember reading months and years from now. It tackles the deeper topic about we age and progress in our lives in a really thought provoking manner. It admittedly does frontload a lot of information at the start which required me to reread it as to avoid being confused, but it was worth it. Thanks for both the entertaining and interesting read!
This novel is dense with mathematical principles, which at times makes you feel dumb, but also makes you feel inspired, that the natural world is witvin your reach if only you would work for it
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I personally like monster evolution stories and this looks like a book people who read fantasy will enjoy. Overall a good book with average writing quality, consistent updates and an mc who has an actual personality and does not just go around mindlessly becoming stronger.
The writing is nice, although there is room for development, such as with certain repeated words that could be replaced with alternatives, etc. Overall, though, I enjoyed reading it, and I would especially recommend this to readers who prefer thiskind of novel.
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Review at 55 chapters:Overall the story is great, MC is not overpowered and stick well to his beliefs.World is cool and it clearly gives capacity to bring many things.Author should Take Care about the repetition of scenario.Exemple : In every village/city that MC arrives, he get almost kidnapped. Ok he is man, but maybe After the 4th time he could dress to hide his gender. If I understood well, he is not branded with a mark so he has no owner. +++ He has powers and knowledge from and another World with advanced technology. His market value as a man is incommensurable in a World like that.It's a bit strange that the knights have not bought him clothes to hide his face and his body to protect him. So ok his gives us content, but having the same thing too much will make it boring after too many times.To end this review, there is a massive problem with the writing quality. Sometimes it just doesnt make sence, grammaticaly, or with some mistakes with the verb/preterit. You have a good story, good characters, good update, but you NEED to work on your writing. It can throw people out the story. If you manage to fixe that, your story will me a HUGE success.????
Can someone repost this.This is a great novel but all removed chapters.So if someone has links for this novel pls post.I want to read it for free tbh or in the end i have to go to patron i guess.
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As early as chapter 3 you will already realize that this novel will be full of nationalism and probably racism as they go hand in hand..........