I really liked this story and recommend it to every one that enjoys this genre! Really loved Klaus character and the fact that once he fell in love with her he never faltered and kept loving and protecting her as he promised!!!! Ohhh and I really hated the bad guys ??u200d♀️??u200d♀️??u200d♀️??u200d♀️
This story was written in an anime-style format. I could easily visualize each scenes in my head. It is nice to feel like watching an anime while reading it.Although each chapter was short, they were straightforward and surprisingly impactful.
Every side I look I see clouds and cloud. Than I saw that 3 other boys was here with me.
The fanfiction has a promising and interesting idea that has the potential to become a great story. Unfortunately, the reading experience is hindered by the poor writing style and bad grammar. There are many spelling and grammar errors that can cause difficulties for readers, and the plot is confusing due to unnecessarily complex sentences and unclear phrasing. We would recommend the author to take more time to express their ideas more clearly and precisely, and to conduct a thorough revision to improve the readability and enjoyment of the story. Despite the weaknesses of the writing style, the story is promising and has the potential to become a masterpiece if carefully revised.
Romance?Wanted to know if you plan to add romance in your novel
Wow! This story is really intriguing ?? I still wanna know more about this story. Great start by the way, the story development is quiet good too. While you handle very well the translation. Keep up the good work, and always do your best. Good luck to us. ??
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hello everyone! ?read this first. ?it's just a little warning and notes you need to take before you read: ?1. my grammar is not the best. you may even find it a frustrate read so you must hold your breath first before making a fuss ?2. this is the first book i've ever wrote so you may find many plot holes. but you can say so, so that i can do better next time ?3. the mc may appear stupid. he is talentless, not a genius. he is unlucky. even if he works hard, he just can't become stronger. and it all affected his behaviour so much ?4. the author needs help! your correction is a good thing. don't worry i will use your corrections well to improve. ?5. uhmmm.... and yeah! thanks for bothering yourselves reading this ?
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The story is very interesting! (´∀｀)♡I love the uniqueness of the plot! (｡’▽’｡)♡It's exciting to see more of the MC's adventure! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡Good job author (♥ω♥*)
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
honestly I don't even know what to say about this story it was most definitely the best story I've ever read had plot twists that I never could have even imagined and so much more the ending was truly unexpected to me and honestly it was the best possible ending there could have been I loved how it all closed together honestly I hope the author continues his writing because thus far I have to say the absolute best writer I have ever read from if there was a possibility to give more stars to the story I would because it was absolutely amazing. p.s I recommend you read the entire story even the parts where it gets slow and parts where you don't want to because once you make it to the end it'll be worth it