keep writing bro. i like that mc didn't just die and reincarnated in ch 1 as usual but u're focusing on building his character habits to get us acquainted. IT'S GOOD THOUGHT.
ps focus more on describing the appearance of characters and world building. As I noticed u were ignoring that.
One of the worst translated stories ever. so many mistakes.......
A great novel with a good start but rushed ending. It has a very good world background. The cultivation system is unique (at least to me).
It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.
The writing style is quite enjoyable and very easy to understand.Mc's personality and the way he thinks are very interesting making certain attitudes much more realistic. Despite having the potential to become an absurdly powerful being, he is in no rush to become strong, preferring to use the knowledge he already possesses to his advantage.The personalities of the manga/anime characters did not change, which makes the MC's interaction with them more interesting and plausible, because as the MC is not from this world, he questions things that normally the characters would not question.The only problem I have with this story is the updates, but according to the author, the story was made with the intention of passing time so it's not something I'm going to complain about. Keep up the excellent story.
like Always, boring weak mc, tired of this
Nice plot but pretty repetitive. A lot of information is repeated. Like a lot, as if the author was just trying to pad words. This pattern seems to repeat al the way to 629. Around chapter 630, the plot changes. Let's talk about how different the plot is. At the end of 629, Kant says they will march to attack the undead in three days. At the start of 630, the undead have apparently been handled. Bunduk is the only remaining hero left from all the heroes he had previously and has seemingly lost his special powers and become an ordinary person.New characters and terms have appeared in place of the other heroes and the Mount and Blade terms. His subordinates seem to have become normal people and not just blindly loyal soldiers. The previous plot with the world nobles seems to have never happened and it basically forgets the whole system that the story is based on. The new plot is based on things that never happened in the original story.I looked for the mtl and the translation definitely follows the mtl. I really have no idea what happened. Maybe Mount and Blade finally caught on to what was happening and stopped the author from using those terms. The novel also ends in like 200 chapters, so idk how the author intends on ending a new story that started 3/4's through the story
The plot is written quite smoothly. Well done. I would say that the expression and use of language for this type of genre is subpar. There needs to be more 'umph' and excitement when writing and describing gory scenes. On a final note, some of the grammar was rather askew - I would advise fixing this so your next readers can enjoy your work!
Woah! What a story.I loved your work and wish you all the best in your writing.Keep updating.??????????????????? Looking forward.
oh boy...this one's a case of where the packaging looks decent but you take a bite and you get a mouth full of sawdust...In the first chapter it says he made a guild together with a friend who then later betrayed him in his first life. Not only does said friend never show up in the early chapters, the MC proceeds to narrate that he never joined a Guild in his last life a few chapters in.Like hello? I know you just slapped a few cliches together and called it a novel but at least keep your facts straight jesus...
I don't usually write a review because for me, as a reader, finds it not worthy of my precious time. If I find good novels, then I'd just commend it in my mind. However, I was taken aback while reading this. It was a well-written story with great potential. This definitely deserves my 5.0 rating.Rejoice, for I, who has an unfathomable taste in novels, have commended you. I hope you continue this story and grow more as a writer.
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