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Sooooooooooooooooo from what I can gauge from this is this is an isekai with similar plot premise, but wondering will it be harem? will it have OP characters or will it have lemon. I look at the possibilities. I can see the author has good creativity and grammar so I can only think there is more going on here and sufficient enough to tell a proper story. First look is already good and drawing me in. I am going in blind, but confident it isn't gonna drag me down. you impressed me so far Mr. Author :3
a captivating story indeed you should start reading this
i am really engraved in how this amazing romance comes to roll out, i keep on thinking about the way actions roll out and think that i am exactly in the story
OMG! I'm in love with this book already even after reading just two chapters. The book is very intriguing. Just give it a try, and I promise the first chap would leave you yearning for more. ????
Essa história realmente é muito boa! A história de fantasia é envolvente e repleta de surpresas. A trama, cheia de mistérios interessantes que traz uma certa curiosidade. Espero que a história continue assim!
Something about this book just makes it stand out from what we all are used to read. The details set up convincing scenes and the intertwinement of inner and outer dialogues allow you to clearly paint the inner world of characters as well as the progress that they make. Their discord community is small but worth checking out for some insides from the author
19 chapters was all I could trudge throughJust mediocre all aroundbunch of info dumps and system stuff that is never interestingworld just feels like mediocre jrpgno interactions between characters basically, be it positive or negativecharacters are uninteresting be it mc or his fiancee, there isn't really any more currently (the gods I guess but they are like meh) handful of copy pasting a part of a previous chapter as if we can't scroll up, basically just increasing word count(just this behavior justifies dropping)is it possible that after another dozen+ chapter is will become much better, absolutely. actually chances are pretty high seeing as currently there nothing worth reading about this, so it can only get better from here.its just too boring wading through mediocrity.would not recommend but it can be read I guess, just don't expect much or anything at all for at least 20 chapters.
I won't call this a shameless review. For I truly believe this story will be yet another masterpiece. I've been planning it for the past 3 years while writing Poison God's Heritage. So I'm pretty sure this will be another banger. The Theme is where I'm strongest, Undead and Litrpg System. you'll be venturing with me in a world that would at first seem endlessly big thanks to how much I have planned. Not only that, but the character diversity and Lore would probably be as big, if not bigger, than the Rise of The Undead Legion. I hope you can all be patient with this work, because it might start off slow, but once the action kicks in, you're all in for a great ride.Never Hunger, Never Tire, Never Fear.
Have to write down a review after reading through 9 chapters ? The writing is superb! It's so detailed that i can imagine myself jumping right into the world. The story itself is unique, and it's fast paced, i like it. Just please continue to update daily, can't wait to read more of these ??
The shameless author here ??Writing a review for your book is sort of shameful, so I'll just clarify some things. Oh and by the way, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments!I am more than happy to answer each one of you!!!- "First of all, what is this book about?" Well, It's about a guy named Atenzi who used to live in our planet, but after his death, he was chosen as a wildcard and got sent to another universe called Universe X.To be more precise, he was sent to Naaim, a planet similar to ours, plus some mythological creatures, and historical figures as evil leaders or benevolent wisemen.- "What type of guy is Atenzi?" He is very disciplined but doubts himself a lot.But as the story goes, he trusts himself more.I f I had to define him in a sentence, it would be that he is the definition of the indomitable human spirit.You'll like him, I promise.- "Will he be overpowered?" Yes and no. Sometimes Atenzi can score easy wins, but most of the time, no.He relies immensely on his high IQ/battle IQ, and knowledge from Earth about several martial arts, philosophies, and other things.Yes, he is like a nerd who can fight and has a strong will.- "Will there be romance?" Yes, but it is indirect and very rare.- "Will there be a Harem? Definitely not.- "How often are you updating?" Currently, I'm dedicated to writing two to three chapters every day. - "Why would you rate your book 5 stars huh?"Well, a person has to motivate and encourage himself!If you don't believe in your craft then no one will.I know I am a new author, and I probably make a lot of mistakes when it comes to writing, but I still believe that, story and plot twist-wise, my book is great! It is my first work and definitely not the last one!- Finally, enjoy the novel, and post a review if you can, whether good or bad, it will help me become a better author, a better version of my current self!Yours truly, Innocence.
The story has an interesting concept which will definitely attract the readers!The Novel unfolds as Ava must grapple with her feelings and decide whether to succumb to Ibrahim's advances or seek vengeance for her abduction.I won't say much to not spoil it, but its a good read and a recommended one!