This story was literally an alternative of magic recovery. Billion talent awaken? Well I forgot but this one base on martial talent the other on magic talent. They are both good stories but there were many grammatical error. I like it but I can't read it. I always confuse on who is who.
hmhm I'm not quite a good critique nevertheless take my world with a grain of salt or whatever condiments you have First of all , sheees that started in a formal way like a proper review hehe pffft ,nah I'ma just say this novel is quite good though there's currently only about 40ish chapters , the updates is also considerably fast , and the writing quality is good , and the story is still developing well enough to make me emersed in reading well not really emersed emersed but it's up there is the emersed scale ⚖️ so do go on with the story writer nim l'ma be just watching,waiting,and reading of course , keep up the good work ya got
The only story where the "chip in the brain" plot device is actually sensible. Whether considering story development or character and world background, this novel is one of the best out there.
It’s disgusting to be attracted to children. People who are need help. It really makes me mad that this is on this app/website. It’s fine if you say that the kid is cute and adorable but to say your sexuality atractted to them is messed up.
So um, I don't know if I wanna walk any further into the novel. Since I don't wanna be immersed than suddenly get hit by yaoi romance. I'm no homophobe. But its just not my preference.
Why another story with MC who has a Chinese name, im done, i can't remember so many Chinese names in novels that im reading, im pretty sure there is more easy and simple names exists in this world with 100+ countries....?And with this kind of story plot it seems we don't need to be worry about reunion or separation cuz most likely it will not happen ?Though i still give this novel 5 star because i like this author works.
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Just caught up to the latest chapter.Can't wait for more.Writing Quality: Some grammar stuff. You can understand what is being said. Nothing too jarring, just needs a couple of passes for refinement/tidying up.Updates: Just caught up, so don't know the schedule. But the author seems to keep the readers in the know with Author's notes.Story Development: Standard gaming stuff. New game comes out, MC and friends start playing, dungeons/quests, meet new friends, repeat, etc. Mostly in-game progress, not much IRL progress except for mandatory logouts/rests.Characters: MC seems good. Has some quirks that his friends understand/playfully use against him. He has a history that I would like to know more of.Roommates need more fleshing out. But that maybe due to the MC not wanting to pry into his friends' personal lives.New set of guildmates have been introduces, will see how they mesh with everyone else.World Background: Standard VRMMORPG. Hyper-Intelligent Learning AI. NPCs that look/act real. Different areas/severs for every nation.
I was told some cats were needed, so here's some cats. also that clickbait is godly, almost on par with the explosions. can't wait for when a boss appears and it's hp resets.
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5 Star? Why not?The MC is the true definition of let's get stronger together, he never leaves all his wives and partners. His clones also keep their partners by their side while doing things at the same time. The story is getting intense with many problems for him directly or indirectly, and it's not focused with lemons. His system is not that op compared the author to three other MCs, and he still needs to struggle to learn new things.
The book is a nice read from the catchy synopsis to the vividly desciribed chapters. The plot is nice and it flows really welll. Kudos to the author for doing a great job.