what I first want to say is if you want to write a novel do some research or atleast understand basic knowledge.this is a type a novel you felt helpless every passing chapters..I am a huge fan of survival apocalypse novels but I thinking about quitting novel only after few minutes...author doesn't even know what happens when a metor and solar flare hit earth. I sometimes thought he thinks both are same....
la premisa de la historia va bien pero hay varias cosas por mejorar:- la escritura no es muy buena, se entiende la idea pero la lectura no es fluida en general algunas cosas ni sentido tienen, en fin si pudiera mejorar la escritura ayudaría a la comprensión y mejoraría mucho la calidad de la historia-el sistema esta mu op, esto no es malo pero si el autor no controla un poco esto puede que la historia se arruine luego, es algo que suele pasar siempre que la trampa o poder es muy op, porque todo se vuelve demasiado fácil, termina siendo un cumplimiento de deseos, a menos que de eso sea la historia?dejando de lado esos 2 problemas la historia se ve buena aunque por el momento hay pocos caps entonces aun no hay una opinión clara
The first few chapters are kinda random, I'm not gonna lie. But I really enjoyed the character development to and the big fight in the beginning, even though it wasn't explained how it happened? Or at least I wasn't paying attention? But I'd really hope to see more of the adventure part to this novel and who am I kidding, I'd love to see more incubism and ecchi in this too.So keep up the good work!
one of the best book have enjoyed so far if you enjoy omegaverse stories......the twist in the story makes it more unique and very interestingI wasn't expecting to enjoy every bit of the story, am gonna miss Skylar, he deserves this happy ending ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like this novel I really do but he needs to have some balls against his sister its just a little annoying when he keeps on backing down like a beta.
New to the genre but the story is immediately engaging. Amazingly detailed and enthralling world building and story telling. 10/10 recommend!
ant chance you keep going please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please prety please please please
Author pls continue this story pls it’s soo good
this is almost unreadable at times. the only reason I'm still willing to read this is because of the characters. this needs a lot of grammar and character association (i.e he, her)corrections to change this from engrisch to english. besides that nothing is amazing about this book. it's just a good read.
READ IT GUYS! Read it to know the worth of the story, a very interesting and exciting System trope novel. The gaming Characters and Story plot is just great. It takes a lot of chapters for me to be hooked with the story, but this book completely made me hooked by just the first chapter.
One of the best original novel i have ever read..as a harem lover..i really like the MC care and attention to each of his harem member. I hope he stays that way till the end of the story. And not too many harem member please, 8 is max i think, so you can give more detail to each of the member.
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