I'm fine with the character and story in fact I'm loving it but it's only 1 chapter per week and it's a very slow roll and since I'm guessing you want this story to be relatively long for what it's worth the current pace is going to bore the people who want to keep reading in response causing them to drop the book please make a new chapter at least 3 times a week because at this pace it's going to die out
very good, I just think (World Background) was very big (low, medium and high mortal plane) and (low, medium and high god plane) and (immortal plane, I want to think it's only 1). Other than that, I really liked the characters and their interaction. Shot one of the best original xianhuan series of the site, congratulations
Pretty good so far but why does the English translation constantly change the gender of characters and confuse affirmations and negations? The characters are development is very good and the story progresses at a good pace.
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horrible, so difficult to read and has braindead characters
Good book but there are a few wrong pronouns and sometimes the names are messed up, but otherwise the story is nice and well paced and I enjoy it quite a bit
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Very great story so far. I think it would be better if you can somehow make the story line a little bit faster cutting very little discription parts and at a little faster timeline.
funny all bad reviews are deleted and rating increased drastically... webnovel really want this novel published. even you rate it badly.its absurd we rate and review novel and they delete it without any reason.
I decided to remove the previous review and write a completely new one. The reason? you may ask. Well, the reason is that my previous review didn't give too much information about the novel, so I decided to write a little about the story here.Pros:1) I consider that writing only about the virtual world is boring, so I will also take some chapters to build a solid and meaningful real world as it is necessary for future chapters. This can be considered an advantage or a disadvantage, according to your personal preference.2) Harem not big or small (it depends on the preference of each one if it is an advantage or not)3) Characters with a clear personality division. For example: the MC is playful and fun for the people he appreciates, but he is indifferent, casual and polite for the rest of the people.4) A strong protagonist in the real world and in the virtual world, but he will still face challenges, many challenges.5) An interesting plot.Cons:1) Harem (as I said, it depends on one's preference)2) The story is not just about the virtual world. There will be interesting scenes from the real world (as I said, it depends on one's preference if it is an advantage or a disadvantage)3) There may be minor errors, however, it does not make the story difficult to read in the least. Still, I try to fix those details as quickly as possible.4) I will not bother too much to shape secondary characters and I will focus more on those characters that will continue to be part of the story.Additional information:Chapter update: 1 chapter per day, if the objectives of the synopsis are met, more chapters.Chapter length: 1500 - 2000 words per chapter.If you have questions about the plot or forgot something, you can ask your question in the comments (politely) and I will answer to clarify doubts whenever possible.In this novel there are supernatural powers, so don't try to make everything too logical.Now, I will not take up any more of your time. I hope you enjoy the story and, if you think it's worth it, vote for it and add it to your library. Cordially, the shameless author who gives himself 5 stars. ^^
Wonderful novel. Gripping and paced narration is maintained till the end.
good story. need more of it.like the mystery around him