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This is a good interesting little story. Sorry Kyosea, but my three spirit stones are already committed to be split 2/1 amongst two other stories and while you've got something good, it isn't good enough to displace either of my favorites…I must say though, I very much liked the idea that some ordinary dude got an invite to a magician's chat group purely by accident…And you kinda blew that almost immediately by having your "MC" be the "Destined One" with beaucoup backstory.EE…One other thing, there has already been one case of "let's memory-wipe the mundane so they don't find out the truth…"So far as I am concerned, tampering with someone's memory is a FAR MORE REPREHENSIBLE CRIME than simply killing them.Faced with a choice—and none of these folks get a choice—"let us erase the most significant experience of your life OR we'll have to kill you…"I'd unhesitantly chose death.Altering someone's memories is a form of mental rape—and the Victorians quite properly named rape "A fate worse than death."
I think this book is very creative for this world. But also, it's VERY FAST PACES. Now thst isn't a bad thing, especially for a fantasy book with real world elements. I think if this book was on chapter 5nI eould say it has a lot of potential, but now it's obvious this book has grown to be something big.
How good is this book?? Well kets just say i read 5 chapters without realizing it! Its that good.The only downside or should I say things you have to get use to is the way the MC is written as idk if its 3rd person or something. But I had to get use to it. Overall great job !
This was super interesting to read!!! I liked how the ML traveled through the road of reincarnation and met others as well. That was something completely different from how most reincarnation stories do! Your writing style is amazing, and despite the grammatical errors, this story keeps you wanting more! I also noticed how you change the paragraphs that I commented on, and I thought that was amazing! An author who is willing to listen to what their readers has to say, is an author that will surely get far in life! Just be sure to take account your own feelings as well when taking suggestions! Other than that, KEEP GOING STRONG!
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It was a thrilling start. I expect even more thrills later on. Hope I'll get to see lots of interesting characters and enjoy a good story onward. I'll be looking forward to it.
11 chapter until now. Its different than the norm here. I don't know if I like it or not yet but I'll give it a 5. .
I a poor little Fanfic Author has never appeared here yet I give 5/5 main reason it's all about the memes and laughs that I get when I read this.
Come on man I want more chapters. Please ? I want to know what happened
I'm a big fan of ww so don't get all angry. you do have to admit that qidian has a better website design to read then ww's. support ww and qidian.
