everything is basic templates, nothing interesting no plot, basic af basically xdd .........................................................
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The concept is soemwhat interesting but there are some major flaws. First is the translation is garbage, one of the maids is constantly refered to as “HE”. The numbers for the system arent consisten. The rank of the MC keep changing randomly. The maids are nice but they are super OP so there is no suspense.
this isn't a serious read and at 20 chapters it's not bad but it's not great. the mc is an idiot just straight up. he creates a character and his talent is luck. he bumbles into something every few steps he either bumps into an npc that gives him a quest or falls down a mine shaft and almost lands on a boss mob. the funniest so far is whe he dumps a viagra powder on a spider boss and a bear boss at the same time and things get interesting lol.anyway the is an idiot, he is a returnee so he names his character "The Returnee" and you get the typical heroic poses. so if you are looking for a light read it's not bad. the translation and spelling is good as also the grammar. if anyone knows the raws would be nice to post it please.
well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts. then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world.0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.
THIS BOOK SUCKS WAY TO MUCH!!! OT DESERVES TO BE TAKEN DOWN!!!
The one and only Patriarch Onion. I have been a fan of yours since I was in high school about four years ago. I haven't read this version here, but I read both versions of this book over on Wattpad and all the other books you've written. And my personal favorite was definitely this one. If this is same as the ones over on Wattpad then it's definitely a book worth reading. One thing that stood out to me the most that I liked was the in-depth explanation of the techniques. And the background of the mc before rebirth is just Chief's kiss, great premise that was explained beautifully. But..*Sigh* I used to be really hooked on your books before, but sadly it's been a while since I've read any since I stopped using Wattpad. But asides from praising this amazing book, I wanted to say you were one of my biggest inspirations to start writing Patriarch Onion. All those times I spent hiding my phone in class to read your books are memories that I'll never forget. Thank you for writing your novels, seriously they hold a special place in my heart.If you ever have the time I hope you'd take a look at one of my books, it's called "The Founder Of Qi, Cultivation."Sincerely, your super, grandiose, mega large, biggest fan, Tseth(The Sage Equal To Heaven hehe)?
The raw are very good, even though it has only 100+ chapters
Summary: MC is originally a genius, but is kicked out of clan after his cultivation stagnates, and survives assassination attempts from within the clan. He's a transmigrator, and gets a system that returns a multiple times better object than anything he auctions off. Starts an auction house and proceeds to power up off of the returns of the auction system, around chapter 100 he's back to seek revenge. My opinion: this is only worth killing time if you can't find anything higher quality. - There are annoying holes in the plot, e.g. where is the MC getting objects from to auction --- if he re-auctions anything the system gave him as a reward, he won't get another reward from it? He builds his reputation on regularly auctioning high quality, rare objects, for cheap ... but where is his supply chain? - More chapters are spent in the auction house, describing objects we will never encounter again in repetitive detail, describing the facial expressions and feelings and conversations of the bidders, and detailing the sales process for each item in each auction... than chapters are spent on the actual events that move the plot forward.- The plot is clearly being stretched out with unnecessary complications and machinations (the MC thinking he's being clever by constructing an elaborate revenge plot) around the time I'm writing this review (on chapter 118).- The translation of an occasional sentence is completely nonsensical in an annoying way that lets you know that no one edited the chapters. Or sometimes the last words of a sentence is missing.I don't recommend this one. Stay away.
I really like the theme of this book and the characters in this book and i dont fInd antrhing wrong with it its a good book and i think it has good character development.
Good story, I am wondering how this review system works for the books since you need a minimal of 120 words. I dont have much to say about the book since I am flipping pages and still continuing to read. I did enjoy it.
This is a really great novel. I like this concept much more than teaching system ones, this novel is for building an academy as a whole, not only just for being a teacher. The concepts on which he powers up is also very nice and allows him to be knowledgeable instead of other novels where they don't know the underlying concepts.