Odayaka
I loved this book very much
Probably the most challenging story I have written. With about 5 drafts and two years of crafting, it’s my longest work. It’s thrilling. I revisit it sometimes and, he, even I get overwhelmed and awed. I mean, it feels like I’m not the one who wrote it.
The words that the author used in each scene were appropriately enough for the reader to have a clear imagination of what is actually happening. She minimized the dialogues but the descriptions were satisfying. Good job, author ?
wow this series is amazing I can't wait to read more From this author
excellent story
Noticed that the blurb doesn't match the story which is a shame because I really wanted to read Iva and Hunter's story...Not that Giselle and Ezra's book is bad, just pointing out the confusion.
The story us just fine
Nice work Author
A well written book
But all in vain as its not even completed.
Investing time and money is just useless!!
Don’t publish these trash to the readers if you can’t even provide the full book.
I really love this novel, especially the portrayal of an independent female protagonist. In several arcs, there wasn't even a male lead, and the main character could survive and thrive on her own abilities. She relied more on herself than on a man to help her. I love the ending where she finally achieves the freedom she has always desired.
Not every realistic portrayal guarantees enjoyment or intrigue; however, I found this novel less realistic than the reviews suggest. The main characters' dialogue feels overly artificial, almost like a script rather than natural conversation. In comparison, the interactions between the protagonist and her mother are far more authentic, relatable, and engaging. Unfortunately, the MC and ML's conversations seem forced and lack depth. The plot sometimes shifts abruptly, creating a disconnected reading experience. Additionally, the translation might have suffered from chapter divisions, although that was likely necessary during the translation process. Overall, I cannot rate this as a four-star novel.
since we only have a hundred chapters left before the main story is completed, ima be stacking hard!!!!
