CloverNine
I don't like it when people put a tag overpowered when it is not an overpowered mc this story is actually weak to strong NOT OVERPOWERED........
Came here looking for copper and struck gold. In terms of story and plot, it does add its own unique twist to the whole monster with a system trope, which only adds to its entertaining factor. What really stands out however is the writing quality as it is extremely easy to simply flow through the chapters mindlessly lost in the story. Grammatical mistakes are almost non-existent and story development is quick. In terms of character, readers come face to face with a raging monster that simply wished to enjoy a better life, something all of us can relate to, and was denied that possibility. So I implore readers to sit down, get comfy and follow mc's journey.
The story is really great. It actually take the basics of fantasy novel but I like it how u manage to do something good with it.It's a little bit slow at the beginning but it slowly and surely go to the right direction.I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
ive read till 286 on mtl, the story mainly develops the subbordinates strength and building a huge army, (currently 100000 strong) pretty good imo
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I like the general story idea, but there are way too many grammar mistakes, and it makes reading it a bit of a chore. plus I'm not too keen on zaya as a character already.
the writing errors overall ruins it, but so does the some nonsensical stuff like, bringing in pre-prepared stuff for a test testing your potential, overall I would've read and payed for more chapters if author would actually fix alot of stufff
typical vrmmo story, the translation for tge first 40 chapters is nit bad but from 41 it's like a standard mtl. don't spend your coins on this
Solid story. Well written, good flow. Excellent work. I look forward to the updates! Hopefully this continues for a very long time into the future.
This was excellent every details are written in the story and it was interesting to read you all will enjoy this story. Author you should keep it up!!!
Good book. It has 10 chapters and got slow pace. I hope things pick up speed on the next chapters. The world is modern setting and turned into a game world.
Every once in awhile , you come across a story which makes you ask "do I deserve reading something this good? " Mc has four priorities : wine , food , poisons , ain't getting ****** over It's devil paragon, so say what you will but his writing skills are impeccable(atleast for a mortal netizen like me)
