this plot is really amazing, I'm in love with this plot as well as so much excited to read further chapter❤❤❤ all the best author I'm waiting for more updates???
The main character should be the blond boy. That's how I remember it, Alex, right?The book is beautiful and flowing. I haven't read much, but it looks like quality jewelleryWell, take it, easy man. Good luck.But right now! The main character must be changed.I felt like commenting today. 4 stars!
Great pacing! Great storytelling. I am truly enjoying reading this novel. It's one hell of a journey. Characters are relatable, especially the MC Arsene. Emoions are there too. I would want to follow him and his journey along. There are a bit of typos here and there but it does not affect the readability that much. Some passages have a poetic tone to it, which i believe, added flavor to the novel. I don't usually read ML-leading novels or cultivation novel but this one has captured my attention. I will surely read on. Its quite fascinating. ?
truly one of the very few stories that got me hooked instantly , and now i can't wait for the next chapters to come out;i've always felt that the usual stories are petty restricted in the enviroment , systeme of developpement and so on, now THIS is real dimentional transfer, and i have that felling that **** just got real, and the plot is just about to start after this arc, can't wait. much love,best story so far (personal view)
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This story has a great idea with lots of humour and well writing. The whole story idea is good and literally anything could happen. Having a shop that contains everything? That's an easy way to cover up any plotholes in the novel. Need storage? Golden bag of holding from a Minecraft mod! Need health? Get a health potion from any game! I'm going to keep this in my library.
I would be lying if I said I don’ t enjoy reading this, I love the author’s style of writing
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After around more than half a year of writing this novel, I'm still at Volume 2 of what I planned to do in this novel. That's why to ease those who are still on the fence whether to pick this up or not, I will be listing the Pros and Cons of what you should expect if you ever decide to try or pick this book up.Cons-Harem(This is a Pro and Con. Why did I list it here? Because some will surely see it as rushed since some information about the Harem Members weren't revealed until later in the story. Though you can spoil yourself at one of the auxiliary chapters.)-One Perspective. (Everything will be in the MC's perspective. Like I've written in my not-so-shameless review months ago. You might find it limited since you can only see the world as it unravels before MC's eyes and you will only be privy to his thoughts and guesses about the other characters. I never switched perspective and it will stay that way until I finish this)-Confusing First Chapters? (I don't think this as a con really. But if you start reading, you'll see numerous comments about readers who thought they already know the entire story from the decision the MC did or how the characters interacted with him. There isn't a established world yet so don't expect everything will be explained in it. If that puts you off as well, then this is in the right category. Anyways…)Pros-Harem (As I have said, this is also a pro. None of those who joined his harem will be forgotten and they are all important to the story. They will grow along the MC and the ones he will mainly support.)-Weak to Strong (You will see how he grows from the bottom up to the point that he's already stronger than most of the Heroes, not only through the stats but also for his versatility. Still he will stick to his role most of the time as the Ultimate Support but if it comes to it, he could step up and try to end the battle as soon as possible or drag it until his opponent reveals a weakness. He's not someone who will fight a losing battle when he's already strong enough. So expect that he'd only either win a fight or retreat when things will not result in a win after a dragged out battle.)-Well-structured Power Levels (I can say that I put a lot of thought to every world's Cultivation Pathway. Each of them are detailed enough to stand on their own for someone to reach the Transcendent Realm but at the same time, they're all closely related. As of the current chapter, there are five established Pathways and you will see the MC cultivate each of them from scratch or at least until the 3rd one.)-MC's Mysterious Identity (You wouldn't see him as someone who has a grand goal of becoming the strongest in the whole universe, his goals might seem unclear for now because of his identity being an ongoing mystery. And that will be slowly unraveled throughout the story. You will probably read some of the theories put out by readers if you delve deep enough in the story. And of course, it will not stay that way. His real identity will soon be revealed before the step up to the next stage of the story.)I guess this is all for now. I will add more if I see that I missed something but I still have more chapters to write so, you can be the judge of your own. Hate or Like the story and the characters, I will give you that judgement. Just don't start attacking an author personally if you don't like what you read. It's easy to drop a book and not be a prick. Constructive criticisms are welcome and I will answer to them if they're reasonable enough.When this novel reached one year old, I will create another review.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?Nice Synopsis! I am hooked! Definitely will add this and read for more!
Unique storyline. I liked how the story started at the beginning of the chapter. This story reminded me of the movie "Nerve." The writing style is well written. Grammar and use of words are remarkable. The main character is well portrayed. Definitely recommended for reading. keep up the good work, author!
nice story good content keep it I love to read though ?? ??????it's so refreshing to read your story get us connect there is a connection a reader can feel it