The story was good however the story was stopped and the last chapter really dodgy asking for people's information.It's a good novel but it is recommended to not read this novel as it is likely not to receive updates and remain the same.
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a well thought story where the mc has an overpower strength that could topple the world. the world background is interesting and i see very few grammar mistakes.... all in all it's a shameless 5 star... thank you for the hard work author!
The author has definitely spent some time thinking about the storyline. I could barely find any loopholes, and if there seemed to be one, either a note is written at the end or you simply missed a foreshadowing.The story really started slow, but I believe that's how every good novel should work, build the world, define the characters, then smoothly transition into how the story should go. And here, emphasis on character development could be felt.Most frequent issue they have is: the MC feels too stupid. Well, the MC does sound like stupid on the earlier chapters, but it was obvious that no individual would still be sane after the things that happened to him irl.But believe me, the novel's very very good.No idea with Stability of Updating, since I'm still trying to finish it. But so far, so good. Chapters are pretty long too, with many things happening at once. Unlike other VRMMOS where chapters could be summarized into 1-2 sentences.. ROO~*cough cough*Anyway, highly recommended.Good job Author-san. Hopefully this doesn't get dropped. Keep it up! ??
I love this novel, I have read it until the first 200 chapters and it is without a doubt a great jewel. It lifts me when the protagonist takes the missions or when teaming with strangers, it is fun to see them surprised by the abnormal personality of the protagonist.
this is the most boring book that I have read in webnovel.Maybe like his/her story the writer is checking if the readers can hold until the end.1- too many theory explanations about everything. 2- is like reading a test book. 3- I can not find a point that was entertaining
Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.
Du Chan will become a legendary character, the world will remember. The story and character design is good although there are a few typos I hope the author corrects it. BTW is this a Chinese translated novel or an original work?
This is one of my all time favorite novels. There are many cultivation novels on webnovel and only a select few are really good. I would include this one on that list as the story is very entertaining and the MC is amusing to me. I encourage anyone on the fence to give the novel a shot. The friends that I have recommended this story to are in love with it and read it every day.
okay so basically i literally read 3 of your stories and they are great for a harem fan like me . Also this story is going awesome i literally love everything and every-shit that's in there (200 chapters in ) i hope you keep tian overpowered cuz in many novels at first mc is overpowered and then gets nerfed afterwards when they go to higher realms i hope you don't do that and yeah please break the fourth wall more often i loved that in that douluo dalu fanfic ( and idk why you stopped writing it :( ...) whatever keep going on fellow man of culture . also more MILFs please
This book is an amalgamation of many popular books, for example the strange one is from another book called my backyard is the dumpyard of another dimension. the fishing pond is also one, the closet little people and the tree. But the most blatant of all is the shadow training
I really love the story.From starting itself its from boys point of viewThe FL has lots of hidden talent and she is kinda happy go lucky type.I really need more chapters nowAuthor plz update daily.