Edgy mess that isn't worth anyone's time. Translation is so poor that I have no idea what is going on with a number of important things like what cultivation levels are or how cultivation even works. The MC has no motivation other than to ... be evil? I could go on but it isn't worth my time.
Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
I liked the start but the story goes downhill as it proceeds. The ML has snake code but he does not have any quality or show any quality. He is always led by his nose by other people. Snakes are cunning, lazy sharp and cruel and they do not possess any of the qualities even after the snake code changed his body. Moreover, the author just confusingly mixed technology and codes. I was at first very interested but after reading till chapter 50, my interest was lost! The whole novel introduces new ideas suddenly in some chapters to carry forward and the character of ML is poor, coward, cautious and extremely weak and have no knowledge about the world.
so i will first go through the two high scores but first I want to say something THE AUTHOR IS A FREAKING LIER AND A BIG TIME LIER AT THAT!going back to the two high scores, he has stable updates, and even though the world background isn't original and highly limited it's not bad, though if I could I would have given it a 3.5, not a 4.now for the writing quality, not saying that I'm a genius in writing or a stickler for grammar, I'm not. and I normally don't complain about non-proper grammatical sentences and I won't here, the problem is that the writing style is very awkward although it's still readable, the style seems like we are reading a list of things that the mc is doing rather than experiencing the moment with the mc. it was highly prominent a the start and lessened slightly later on and if the 2 things I'm gonna talk about weren't so bad the awkward writing style wouldn't have been a total dealbreaker.story development, eh, actually I'm kinda torn. i like how the other characters aren't your stereotypical "you dare! you seem to have eyes but not have seen mount tai" but the main problem is with the MC, he I supposed to focus on cultivation so he specifically joins a sect that specializes in pill making yet the story bends backward to keep the mc as naive as possible, they literally teach him NOTHING LITERALLY NOTHING and that's the ACTUAL theme of the novel, total idiotic (yes e instead of an I was done on purpose) nativity.he also gets everything without any effort.character design, I would have actually given the character design a 2 or 3 if the mc was normal stupid, but this MC would not be accepted In the "special" class at school, they need the special version of the special version of the special class to nearly keep up with the mc's ritardedness.forget 3 brain cells or no brain cells, I'm pretty sure this dude has a high negative IQ probably the most idiotic mc i have ever read in my entire life and i read the trial read novels with every cycle for the first free chapters...the author tries to play it as if the mc is naive because he was working on a farm, but his idiocy reaches levels that this excuse can't justify, simple things like 5 min of research is something that he actively doesn't do, he actively digs himself holes and then he realises that he dug himself a hole so what does he do? he digs it even deeper, if you reach ch 48 you would know what i mean.fine, the dude hasn't ever read or watched any fantasy/ cultivation anything but do a slight bit of research, my dude, if that's something you got interested in the first instinct is to read up on it or watch things on the thing you are interested on to gain as much info as you can.going back to the author being a lier, in his comment he says that the mc is mostly ignorant for the most part for the first 10 chapters, but that's a lie, if anything as times go on it gets worst and worst as you can no longer excuse his ignorance.
One of the best Xianxia story. The comedy is good, MC is getting "wiser" and develop really well. at the middle and the last update many words of wisdom that can teach you about life and stay true about your dao of heart.
I don’t know if the translator for this is horrible or if the author is downright bad but either way this is garbage that shouldn’t exist
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It’s a great story just wish there were more chapters to read
I wouldn’t usually give 5 stars to everything when review but the quality I most definitely enjoy, the updates couldn’t be any more stable then what they are now, it could be more yes but once people start doing more especially after getting contracted they tend to burn out. I’m happy with getting something everyday so thats why I gave this a 5 rating. I gave the story development 5 because I like how things are turning out so far, with out giving or trying not to give spoilers, let’s just say we know the some paths for the future already concerning the game, the real world, and the asteroid(im ending her so read to find out more) but I also gave it a 5 because it’s not predictable I know those 3 things will definitely be important later but I don’t know why yet so it draws you in with thinking(for me what would I do if I was in the situation) the character design I gave a 5 because at first I was like who can this MC get passed his innate defects, will spoiler his innate talents and the 3 things I mentioned earlier. And it’s still early enough that we are meeting others coming to know more about them as story goes(it’s not just stable in updates but the rate of development in my opinion) lastly background is a 5 because again we have the info but we don’t know the reasons for everything we are giving enough to speculate and comeback for more. Give it a shot if you don’t like it at least try to get to the part after he was forced to do a certain thing as thats in my opinion when every thing starts to pick up the true development because that moment leads to other pivotal ones we’ve gotten so far. Thank you for reading this farTLDR? It’s stable the main character is flesh out and though it’s still early we use budding side characters or supporting characters that could be vital. story moves at a moderate pacing giving you the world background of the world the characters and how everything came to be at the current point in story doing a good job to further help boost its development. All in all you get the info but it’s don just right that there’s still mystery and allure to drag you in
HeheheheheFirst review(Alsopanda, I can’t see the novel in your novel section, I got to it from one of your comments)**actual review down below**TbhThere’s not much to sayVery good novel with a good trope that isn’t seen a lot plus the panda makes it so much betterAnyhowAny future reviewers must bow down to me for I am the first ever review of the novel
I can't lie, I seriously fell for this book? and I really feel bad for Adriano, I pray his wife isn't dead for real and I hope he finds her ?.keep up the good work author ?