It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, so I won't lie and say it's the best novel on this site. Give it a read, if you aren't interested in the first ten chapters then you probably won't fully immerse. However, I must say it was worthwhile writing this, so I'm sure it's going to be worthwhile for some of you to read this as well.
Review:
World Background: As of now not much about the world has been explored as it is still very early into the plot. Though I have plans of creating a massive world with its own history and politics, we will have to wait and see if I have the ability to deliver.
Writing Quality: Though I speak English often, I am not a native speaker. That's to say, my writing is readable, but not impeccable. However, I don't believe that it takes much from the quality of the story, but you will notice a few errors here and there.
Story Development: The pacing is rather on the slow side, though it is to be expected with the type of story I am trying to create. As of now, not much has happened in the plot, but it is indeed beginning to thicken,
Character Design: I try my best to give my characters depth, and though it does not show now. I have already set the foundations for future character growth and hence dimension.
Overall an average story told by an average author. Though you would do well not to assume you have any clue whatsoever where my novel is heading. The media I consume is vastly different from that on this site, and my end game will go in a different direction from most third-rate work that is devoured here.
Happy reading.
It's good so far. But I really hope this won't be a typical cliche novel where a supposedly dangerous and psychopathic yandere obsessed with another person suddenly becomes an uwu girl for the MC and accepts any girl in his harem.
The start is okay but I do strongly dislike when the system kind of has a mind of its own and is rude, for example; In this novel, when the MC gets the system, the system keeps calling him "stupid" or "idiot". Although the MC isn't exactly smart, the system shouldn't have that big of an opinion that it needs to constantly voice how stipid he is and just explain it instead.
Fantastic start. Got hooked from the get go. Recommended to everyone
The novel is great but can I get a link to the discord.
It's very nice bro and just don't make it a harem
I dont know who is at fault the translator or the writer but this novel reads like a summary. I have read spoiler sections with more character development and world background.
It's very frustrating to see translators releasing one chapter for a month, pathetic translators.If the translator doesn't want to continue, don't give hope. I hate it. ?
this is good...........................................................................................................................................
Pretty interesting novel. This is my first time reading a healer profession mc. The novel has an intresting concept of a healer that can gain strength from buffs. I see great potential for this novdl from its plot and writing quality. Keep it up author. ?
hope this gets picked heh
A magical theme, Earth, hope it happens in real life. There's no need for ISEKAI cuz the Dimension Gates themselves is already a form of ISEKAI.