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Just really enjoyable and lets not forget its not just like all the copy and paste cultivation novels.
The Title is good. To me, the main character with the information he has in his usb shouldn't pay attention to learning at first, especially since he has pills for quick learning. On top of that, his dead weight in the form of his friends makes the narrative itself very bad. To me, the main character should be like Samantha in the beginning of Doing It All Alone. As an example of this, there is a title in which the protagonist has a yusb with which he can pull items from movies. And at any given time he can cast off friends or family. In this story, it's his friends at the beginning and his father and brother.
Really good stuffKeep it coming Author..
A story of action, bright characters and comedy. This tale has it all and more.Definitely one to look out for and eagerly awaiting further installments to the story.
here for the challenge have yet to really understand
I really liked the genre the author adapted. Putting high hopes in this new novel!! yippee! ? a lil typos though but, we can definitely overlook it!!! All the best Author! FEED US MORE!!
So far I'm enjoying the book , the story line is amazing and intriguing . Honestly, this book has stare some feelings in me that I never thought even existed. Though there were about 2 word repetition in the first chapter which the writer apologized for. It's word your time.
A good story and very acceptable as a start.The development of the hero is very noticeable, at least the hero is not stupidIt is better than most of the novels on the platform. I expect a lot from you
Plot: ★★★★★ (5 stars)Update stability: ★★★★★ (5 stars)Main character: ★★★ (3 stars)Side characters and character development: ★★★★★ (5 stars)World-building: ★★★★★ (5 stars) Keep going author , one of the best novels that i ve ever read deserve 4.8 or 4.7.Please just be sure to keep the quality like that and dont update so fast and rune your novel .
Will the author still continue this book? It's really good though. It's been awhile since a story fascinated me so much.
I love the story, it's very well structured... The main character also...Even though I don't like Twilight very much, the characters are good...And bring together the originals is a brilliant idea... To be continued...
great novel i loved the interactions with his family hope you continue with it
