The story is very good, it may seem slow to others but there is a lot of world building, foreshadowing, character development. I like all the details, especially those about the power system and the world background. I woudn't mind to know even more about the world. The characters are also quite likeable in my opinion. I really like the style of writing, it flows naturally and it seems "clean". Also, I didn't notice grammatical errors, just a name switch between Heima and Henrietta in a chapter I think, but that is understandable.
I like story so far, keep going ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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I don't think my review has any real meaning coming from an inexperienced writer suchas me, but I'll give my views on the story anyways.So from the first few chapters, there were many, many descriptions. Much so that it cut some fights and actions halfway, leaving me in awkward reads once in a while (though that's what I just observed).There was also shifts in narration perspective, leaving me confused from time to time on whether the narrative of thestory is infirst-person or in third-person omniscient (I just figured out that every chapter that starts with "memories of..." is in first-person perspective, so yeah).I also wasn't too invested between the characters, you know, having too many introduced in the first few chapters. It left me feeling like "I don't really care if Velsado dies or whatevs..." and more of like "When are the powers and magic stuff gonna come again?" Yes, I think I'm back to being a nine year old.Although many things broke my immersion with the story, I really found the richness of the worldbuilding complete. The concepts of the story is unique, and I honestly don't know where the story will go (Although being predictable once in a while is a good thing). The many characters interacting with the world events, it really felt like a very much solid story where I don't think plotholes will arise (unlike in mine where I'm still fidgeting to fix loose ends).If you reached this part of my review, then thank you for reading. Hope you'll kinda get something out of my review although I'm still new to writing myself. I just limited my review to the writing quality, story progression, characters, and worldbuilding if that's okay.Cheers!
This is a great novel. Its really interesting and the mc, while he practices buddhist techniques he is also a demonic buddha and its awesome. This should get more support.
suprised this has been out for so long with little attention or review but the author keeps posting regardless and doesn't drop, you deserve a all 4 star review just for the sheer effort and dedication other people dont have.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Chinese Title : 我是幕后大佬Author : 刀斩斩斩Author Level : 5Chapters : 855 ( Completed )Will review after completion. As of now it's interesting although i would have liked the MC to more involved. Some game mechanics are confusing in raws so many people might miss few details.
The main characters personality is absolutely unbearable. He gets taken advantage of consistently and for extended periods of time I have to drop it. The late 80s to early 90s chapters are what did it for me.
i like this novel a lot as the maincharacter has an ancient bloodline that is overpowered and it is share with the same universe as the first novel of the author rise of the demon god
Camping for a change in translator!! Support my review if you agree, guys!! Let's help each other in this. I've waited for like 4 months and all I get is 6 chapters? Wth man.
My favourite character in fiction is often the one that makes me say "You smarmy little...".Now this story has the smarmiest I've ever seen. Then they made the genius decision to make him the main character. That's already enough for me, all other good stuff is just bonus.