this is what i have been looking for such a long time... finally found it...one the best stories with correct timeline choice..keep it up don't drop... looking forward to future chapters
Very fun to read, update rate is fast and siri has a real personality here. Most importantly, mc isnt a soul reaper! I have been getting sick with fanfics not exploring the hueco mundo
I hope you enjoy it, I put many hours into it to make sure it's perfect, and I would upload a new chapter every 3 days to a week, Enjoy
Hello Guys!!TurtleMaster here.I am a huge fan of light novels, manga and anime. This novel is a first time writing work for me. So, I tried my best in creating a vast and cultural world filled with real-life inspirations(can be found if searched properly).Please Support Me by leaving a comment on your honest opinion as it will help me greatly in improving myself.Thanking You Once Again,TurtleMaster_______Forgive me for Rating my own Novel XD.The 5 star rating signifies my commitment to do my best for this novel.
While I don't fw heroic mcs per say, i don't hate a well written well either. I like that Takahiro is compassionate and is willing to work hard for his family. My gripes though is the system with a personality, but that's just my personal preference. some logical choices here and there also feel as he's not really thinking about his family, for instance in that moment he tries to stop the mugger which had high chances of injuries that could stop him from working he still rushed in, while admirable i feel as if he's not truely thinking of his family as it could put them ina further financial strain and and situation, and if i truely was thinking about them i'd have handled it another way instead of rushing in. But i've only read 2 chapters though so while i can't say too much on the direction I hope you put realistic and gritty scenes in it that set the real aspect in. That moment he distributed his stats also urked me, I mean at least put 100 in each stat at least bro.Anyways it has potential if given the right direction, character insight and introspection and reflection, your writing is also well done, concise and fairly well paced which i liked. I hope you succeed in the story you wish to carve.
This is an awesome story, the writer has a unique way of mixing in both 3rd person and 1st person POV.That's a rare ability, and of course the descriptions are wonderfully made out, it gives a perfect picture. Hope there's more of this cause I'm still reading in.
Honestly, I'm not a review type of person. In fact, I don't even comment much, but I've read thirty chapters so far I'm just confused by the lack of traction. It starts of slow and relaxed in the first few chapters, with hints of battles and honestly, I thought that's how it's gonna be, but by the thirtieth chapter, all I can say is that the wait was damn worth it. Three battles back-to-back and damn, none of them missed. But these cliffhangers man...Anyways, as for the review. Well, I don't usually do these things, I think I said that before. But aight, well, I've read much more than the one hundred and forty-five books my profile says I've read, and honestly, from a slightly experienced reader's standpoint, the quality of writing in this book is above-average, I can give the author that much. Since the first two chapters, it's always been two chapters a day. There were also a couple days that had four chaps published which was more than appreciated. Simply saying that the story is developed well might be downplaying it, but yeah, it's been developing well. As for character design, Seth is so far, the most intriguing character, but though we can view the protagonist's thoughts, Anon, he still remains the most complex out of the characters revealed. The secondary characters are more than just fleshed-out. They almost seem as individuals within another world. This's the best way to describe it, the author is showing us a world, and we're viewing this world. Like any other world, there're individuals within it. Obviously, the characters feel like genuine individuals when the author is taking this approach. As for the world background, after stepping into this expecting some type of post-apocalyptic world of ruins, I was quite surprised by what I had stumbled across, but then again, with how hyped up "that man" is, I guess it's to be expected. But there's that underlying tone that the current society might be even darker than it is... well, it could just be me digging too much into it. And that's that. All I can ask is for Mr. Author to take his/her time and complete this.
I like the premise of this book, pls do not drop, also can u tell me btw whether this book is translated or not?
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"I woke up and noticed she was gone. We rushed to the alley where we had made the pentagram previously in the day." Derik continued.
"I really don't."
I waited until Hoseok got out from his shower, controlling myself before pouncing on the wings, because it smelt so good!