Very great novel, been following since on royalroad. Drake is an absolute unit and I love his interactions with the other characters.we've not seen much of the bigger world since we're still in the tutorial, but I can see a lot of potential for the world building.Solid grammar, great power system.an awesome novel all round
I have the read series twice and it's really good. Hope to read book 12 completely soon. I wish the author gets well soon will be able to complete the series.
Extremely boring and bland, frankly just irritating to read. Was actually decent in my eyes until Xuan Yanran, weirdest pedo ever. I feel like the author himself realised how weird it was and tried to mitigate it in the next chapter. I think this because when she was introduce it was said she was 16 years old but then she became 10 years old, this is relevant because she likes the 10 day old MC.Not to mention the pacing, its so slow, so so slow. I get its a slow cultivation world but when this man is creating heavenly phenomena to still be an infant and in body refinement at like chapter 28...... just do a time skip. The marriage annulment killed it for me I mean come on this Xiao Shui has done like nothing maybe you can argue his family is a bit annoying but the Mc just clowns on him for no reason at all. I just can't.tldr: Slow and Boring
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That fact that the mc gets beaten for character development is amazing love it.__________________________________________________________•.•
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Like majority of novels on this site, it starts out well only to become unbearable, cringy and embarrassing to read. Decent quality of writing, with little errors but poor sentence structure... 3 stars Updates are reliable... 3 stars Story development involves almost every single character trying to kill mc with no reason and mc fighting them in retaliation... so plot is nonexistent and in its place is the typical angst and drama associated with silly revenge novels... 1 star because I can't give zeroCharacter design amounts to mc, fmc and everyone else... all characters beside mc and fmc have changes in behavior for plot convenience (eg: his parents who are rebellious turn meek and cowardly so that mc's enemies can attack him, all so that mc can have his edgy revenge arcs... yes they are only revenge arcs so far)... I give this 1 star otherwise i would give it zero Worldbuilding involves mentioning of location names... no place is described hence impossible to imagine... 2 stars
Hello, I do not have vast experience in writing novels, but I do know that every opinion and review is valuable. Therefore, I would take this chance and express my thoughts about this story. First, there are no significant grammatical errors in the story. There may be some in each chapter, but it does not hinder understanding the flow of events.As for the development of the story, I think that while it's great and well thought out, there are chapters that are 'somewhat' insignificant to the story that I think can be described in shorter words. This is also related to another issue regarding this novel. I don't think I have the qualifications to advise a writer since I have no experience regarding that. But, as a reader, I think that the author likes to give too much detail in describing things in the story. For example, the author will explain the logic behind something that still has no significant role in the current phase of the story. I think that instead of going into too much detail as something was introduced, it would have been better to just give some overview regarding it until it becomes significant to the story so that you can describe these efficiently and timely. Why am I giving such a fuss regarding it? It's because I think highly of the story and it drives me mad to see the story progress, but it irks me that some chapters that aren't too far from being cheap fillers are present. It's good to present the story of side characters, but going into so much depth that causes the story to somewhat lose its luster is not very good.As for the character design. In my opinion, the author did very well in describing and giving color to the characters. Each of them has their personality and identity, causing their interactions with each other very lifelike.As for the updating stability, I have no issue or opinion regarding that.Lastly, for the world background, the author did excellently. The author did not give too much nor too little information, instead providing just enough description about the world and its power structure.Overall, I think that the story is good and is worth a while. The only problem is still the use of too much info in describing certain things and the chapters that resemble cheap fillers.
It really doesn't make sense at all, like a story written by elementary school children. how is it possible that with the sudden appearance of such a magnificent hall and house not raising any suspicion at all????
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Since this story is about to get buried in Webnovel I figure I'll write my first review ever. Hopefully it will be found and picked up later.It's 5 stars because it has a solid premise and also has potential. I'd honestly give it 4 stars based on what is shown as of the 36 chapters here, but 99% of people seem to have a pass or fail type of rating system so I can only adjust it in the future so as to not harm the novel.For those purely desiring an overpowered system, an OP mc, a pet taming, or an extremely fast paced novel where the MC is already in core formation or tier 3 power in less than 40 chapters... this novel isn't for you. For those who want a slower paced novel (built for a 1000+ chapters easy) with a lot of world building and some hardships where the mc is actually shown to struggle.. the target audience is somewhere in this group. This story reminds me a bit of the earlier translated web novels from when translating xuanhuan and xianxia web novels started to blow up, albeit not quite at their level yet.Now, the synopsis and title may be a little misleading, but I'd still say the story so far has been oriented around the mc's clan. I am interested if it will be like this in the far future of the story though, as it seems hard to maintain since mcs usually grow too fast for their clans to keep up without what are basically cheats, so 99% of the time they get left behind. His smartphone thankfully isn't too overpowered yet and only has 2 of the functions listed as of chapter 40. Granted, the trading currency for spirit stones seems extremely broken so I kind of hope he never gets that one. The story also "skips time" pretty frequently, but it at least makes sense. In a story of immortal cultivation where the mc is cultivating at a fairly normal pace that's bound to happen as there will be lots of downtime. There is a decent amount of explaining and world building, especially at the start, which I know can turn people off.Lastly, the author is trying to give the idea that the mc is a normal cultivator struggling with his path to immortality. Alas, he is still an mc with a couple cheat codes that give him an edge.Overall, the story has potential and hopefully the author can grow with this one. It is a tough writing style/novel to attempt and it's not for everyone to like.
To be or not to be this is avadakedrava, but i say expelliarmus maximus or execto patronuuuuum idk kekw lol i've finish the argument, and i'v nedd to write 140 character