Arya also joined happily "Air can carry light objects and sound waves. Water flows downward. Creation of different worlds due to differences in energy level."
Charles thought for a second before he drove slowly. A melodious music from the radio playing a song that accompanies their ride.
Gev saw Kaxs looked at him incredulously. He raised his eyebrow. "What?"
'Wow, it felt different when you experience it yourself.' (Melissa)
25 (2002/07/28)
It's good for the first 100 chapters. Even though it's got grammar issues and drags on with explanations, I could still enjoy it. But after that, it gets convoluted with 3rd party stories that feels like unnecessary filler. it stays like this for 100 chapters with atleast 40 of them having nothing to do but give worthless filler that gives nothing to the plot.
overall ok but in starting i was confused as author was making connections to another novel but it is ok at this point as later i understood the flow but the author is focusing too much on a single side character to wa zi( mc is now only mentioned in the passing only when he needs his protection only) I think it is because he thinks he( to wa zi) is funny or something but it is not and because of that I am dropping this novel here
hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
Its your amazing Author again, You guys must have noticed that I have changed some content and made little tweaks to the previous chapters. I have done this because the previous chapter were lacking in both quality and quantity when it came to words and plot etc.. so I had to take the bitter pill and I have been improving the previous chapters for the past 48 hours making sure there are no errors.
no harem, mythology, occult, and mystery plus a bit of horror so I love it...===============================================================
I have found that I care a lot about the characters and their eventual ends in this story, which is good. There has been a ton of character development and unique characters so I actually know who someone is when I read their name instead of skipping past their name because they're unimportant and bland. The side characters have major roles and they affect the plot in a big way.
It needs an editor badly. I don't even want to look at it. One star with no exceptions.Not even the synopsis is immune, at least use grammarly.