Just got done reading first chapter and it’s written pretty well and had a good explanation for a lot of things so good read so far ........
The storyline is great along with the plot but the grammar and punctuation is pretty bad. The storyline and plot support each other and you are not being confusing but the grammar and punctuation make the story hard to understand as it mess’ with how easy it is to read. I would proof read a couple of times to make sure it is ok and flows nicely
4.8? (chap 22)it's a slice-of-life and drama fic, and light- hearted.author have created a hidden boss, may be not light hearted in future!!?.you will enjoyed it, but if you are not one of those idiot, who search only mistake... then.....
i usually dont do this, but this is honest to god a great novel man............................................................................................................................
started off ok but gets worse... grammar is pretty bad and doesn't improve... how is this recommended... also personal opinion - the system with emotions n stuff kinda ruins the story. wouldn't read it
Giving a low score for two reasons.1.I always go into these kinds of books hopeful but come out disappointed. Usually this is because the MC does a complete 180 in personality and winds up being someone that I despise.2. I'll remain leery of these ones until I see something that has become a trope happen.
Free chapter were edited to make it look good...after chapter 40 it became bad very fast...no editing at all...just mtl....just delete your translation group its just trash...you should be ashamed of yourself for doing such a bad job
the story seems ok but the translation quality makes it very hard to get into the flow of the story as your always trying to figure out what is happening.
The translation is very confusing at times and often uses words that have completely different meanings from what is intended. For example, not a single worm has appeared twenty chapters into the series. Instead, there have only been things like lizards, snakes, and centipedes, which are definitely not considered "worms" in English. One reader commented that the translation is supposed to be something like Gu, which is prominent in Asian horror novels involving evil magic creepy-crawlies and would make more sense than "worm." Another confusing detail is when a broken limb gets mixed up with an flesh wound or an amputation. A broken arm is much less of a problem than an amputated one, and these are two very different meanings in English. That said, it is possible to figure out what the translation was probably supposed to say.When I first voted for this novel, I expected to see an MC who died with worms crawling over his body before he revives as an undead lich or something. Thus far, there are no worms, and the MC is very much alive. I assume the "worm" part of the title is a translation error, but I don't know if the "lich" part of the title means that the MC will die and come back as a lich later on or if this is also a translation error.The story development is confusing, which doesn't help the odd translations. It picks up after the first ten or so chapters. The logic is skewed all over the place as far as characters and development go, but part of that could be a cultural thing.The culture is very interesting to read about and is the main reason I am still reading this series so far. I'm not sure how long it will keep my attention, but the distinct culture described in this series is the only reason I've read so many chapters.The MC isn't likeable so far and hasn't shown much depth. He has shown some development, so hopefully that will continue to be interesting. A cop has played a prominent role so far, but he is basing his judgement of guilt or innocence purely on his gut instinct and not evidence. There are cases I've read about where an officer has forged evidence because he "knew" the suspects were guilty, but they were proven innocent later. Naturally, the officer in question went to prison. The cop in this story is like that, and he's incredibly annoying and sullying the name of investigation. Then again, this is China, so I'm not sure if they prefer following feeling over reason as part of their legal system, unlike the one in my country. Otherwise, none of the side characters have been particularly likeable or worthy of attention.Although the cultural details are interesting, there isn't much information about the world background itself. The storytelling is messy at best, and there's no clear summary regarding "wizards," who are more like evil sorcerers or witches in this setting. I'm not sure if any clarification will be added later. So far, there has only been a detail dropped in once every several chapters, so the system of magic or voodoo or using familiars or whatever exactly is supposed to be going on here doesn't leave any basis for the reader to understand it.
When I first started reading Webnovels, this quickly became one of my favorites and then it was dropped and now I see it again it has over 500 chapters. .. ????????ty author
Seems promising at first, but after reading a few chapter I feel like wasting my time... so bland, no flavors.. and tasteless. .
I just reaaaaallly wanna say that the picture is really cute. Did not expect something like this her at all ?. The name pet king sounds a lot more domineering than the picture suggests. ?