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It feels kind of poorly written and I'm lost with the names. Many chapters between a secondary character that appears for like 3 lines and the next time the name appears again. I can't tell who is who.
Fuck its awful! Guess ill move on to the next ln with an identical premise and hope its better
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It feels like the story is adventurous. The writing quality is good, and the world background seems fine, too. For other things, the chapters are few to evaluate. I hope the author will publish a chapter faster.
I love this kind of story so much. The ML has both brain and power, he always outsmarts some characters and fights well. It is so fun and worth reading. The lead always impresses me, he's so cool and funny at the same time. I may sound like a simp (lol) but he makes the overall of this novel perfect.
Didn't expect him to really become a villain and not a hero who became a villain by saying they're misunderstood and giving excuses like the world isn't black and white. However, his sect principles are really dumb.
story is well thought out so far. however the grammar is poorly written though it is able to be followed so I think it is a matter of lazy writing rather than lack of ability.
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Mano why don't you make a novel without a system? Is it too difficult or creativity doesn't exist to think of things that make sense that really make the MC strong and different?????????????
Such a good story why did it have to be dropped ??????????????????????.......………….................................lol
If you like exposition, useless fillers, repetition, excessive repetitive descriptions, and eventually plot movement every tens of chapters....this is for you. It had potential, but the writing style just screams filling out word count.