It’s okay but I think the plot need to go more in depth on the world. Yeah but it’s really good so far. I definitely recommend reading this.
Haven't red it yet. Will likely write a new one later. Judt felt like the author was a good guy. And judging by the amount of chapters and the high review scores i think that he is pretty unlucky to not be popular
The story is like a GM creating and expanding the game to accomodate more players, as well as fixing loopholes in the system, etc. It's like the GM created a character for himself in order to experience his creation. The Players did not even know that they are interacting with the GM himself ? characters are also fine, side characters have enough exposures, no more, no less. A bit interesting because we only know that Ocean Blue is a type of Incomplete God right now (was a complete god in the past), as other types of God may or may not appear in the future.
Badly translated, the mC gets items that either arent mentioned agaIn or dont exist the mc is wayyyy to op and in a very bad way as the scaling makes no sense. ex mY pet has 100,000 health and is op and i have The immortal armor
It's almost been a MONTH~! soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~
A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
really a good story excellent characters and overall just a great world background and design you can actually feel as if these heroes are actually a lot also author where can I get this game I will find you and you will give me that game immediately
I suddenly realised that I had yet to review this book. So… here goes nothing.Short review: It’s a really good read. The stats speak for themselves.Long review:Writing quality: Not the best there is. Honestly, it can even be quite confusing at first. But the rate at which the dear author improved is scary. The writing in the later chapters might even drag you into the world inside the book. That being said, it might not be the best in WN, but not that far from it.Update Stability: It’s as stable as stable could be. Expect at least one chapter everyday, or even some ‘accidental’ mass releases.Story development: It’s not the most unique of stories. But fret not. A story is not driven by its uniqueness. It’s driven by ‘questions’ and ‘answers’, at least to me. And the way dear author used these elements is fine enough to keep you intrigued, to turn those pages (or scroll that screen to be precise).Character design: Here again, the elements of ‘Questions’ and ‘Answers’ are used. The major characters have depth and an air of mystery. But keep reading, the air of mystery will subside but depth- will increase, slowly but surely.World background: It’s a typical Eastern fantasy setting. So those of you who are veterans (and I assume that most of you are) can easily get accustomed to the world.And finally… it’s YURIIIIIIII!!!!Give it a try and you won’t regret it. Thanks.
Ch19 - It's slow and feels super dry MC - I want to relate to this guy.....working a shitty job with an education background that could have got him something better, whilst surrounded by shitty colleagues but the Author just makes him come off like I'm meant to despise him.MC background - Has parents in the village, Has two Uni degrees, doesn't know martial arts - Yet author will always remind you of his degrees and tell you that he knew how to fight and he doesn't carry a umbrella cos he's a real MAN. World background - Gym, gym, gym gym, dorm and a abandoned factory. Side characters - His best friend has the most depth, Id like to see a story on him and his messed up relationship with his wife.
Really good r-18 novel keep up the good work.................................................................................................
look what I found, someone's trying to plagiarize this.
Author watched too much shtty Japanese anime,so this novel is mostly similar to em. I personally don't like em but I think there are people who like them. So, all the best to the bokenshas or whatever