Haizao
The kingdom was beautiful it has so many people and has a lot of buildings and shops. And have a lot of lights in it there are guards to that patrolling into the kingdom. We were amazed when we see the castle it's beautiful.
Meanwhile Rena was standing there sighing to herself as the welp completely ignored her. "Hmm from the looks of it this little one is most likely alone if his mother were with him she'd come after me in a rage." Remembering a past incident similar to this she felt a slight headache, because their was nothing scarier than a several tone mother capable of creating sonic booms to chase after you and beat you for bothering their precise children. "He dose look good though, to bad he was born a mixed breed or he would have a wonderful life."
Ains: I will go and get the weapons, rest, for now, I will bury him also.
- Wow… our Lord is truly powerful… - Said one of the ghosts, sanding behind us in guard to protect us in any case of psionic energy overflow. I turn to her, curious.
In the time of a blink, he had taken the whole scene in, a man sat on top of Mable who way laying on the floor near the door. He had some sort of small weapon in his hand and was roaming his other hand over her body. The rest of the room was utterly irrelevant to him, he raised his hammer.
and novel after invisible dragon is Duike look forward to it~~~
This novel has several problems and most of them come from the fact that the protagonist keeps the memories of the past life. after reading about 200 chapters I can say that the author has no idea what he was doing and seems to have gotten lost. the fact that the protagonist has the memories of his past life, did nothing but make him weaker mentally and a person who seems to be bound by the laws and cultures of his past life, I didn't see any benefits from having the memories of the previous life. and that only made him pathetic. all this just to spend hundreds of chapters for "evolution" of the protagonist.
plz add more of this masterpiece its really good
The grammar is one of the biggest flaws of this.It would greatly help the author if they put their story is a word document or grammarly or etc before publishing, because the amount of grammar mistakes makes me think they made it in under an hour an were cutting corners.
I don't understand why so little is said about this novel, it has its charisma, and it's worth reading.
Great first chapter for "The Bloodborne Heir," Bartholome! Alaric's journey from orphan to finding a loving family is heartwarming. Subtle hints about his past leave the reader curious for more. Keep writing!
"Excellent!" Master Egor's voice boomed, he then turned to his son and commanded "Get everyone ready! This time we will definitely let Maria know what real power is!"
