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There is no soul to these works anymore. I feel like I am being fed plastic foods instead of real food. Qidian seriously needs to rethink its goals.
Writing quality is bad. There are some chapter in which the author tries using proper grammer (probably with the help of some software), but a lot of chapters are just straight up horrible, and barely readable. From sentences that make sense and weird random words in places they don't belong, to flipping back and forth between first and third person perspectives and weird tense changes. It's all in there.The writing quality makes this novel hard to enjoy.Only give this a try if you're not really bothered by poor writing quality.Besides that, from what I've read, things all seem like a fairly generic xianxia novel. Nothing too special, but also not horribly boring.
This is amazing very interesting novel can't wait for more updates, also i think we need a bit more faster update but its still good.Also epic we need more action :D idk if im the only one who read this but its amazing
Really bad, no plot or interesting scenarios plus quiet a few scenarios are exactly the same as in "First Day in game, i got ten billion from infinite number of check ins". Not sure who copied whom but I dropped the other one too lol
I hate Simps and the mc is a SIMP, the story is alright you should read it if you are bored that is if you like a SIMP, well it's just my own opinion.This should happen to the FL......
Btw, what is the back story of the main girl 'Cait'.........................................................................................
nice story, but I think you should add cover to all your novels to attract more reader's Adios waiting for next chapter ✔️
As a Pole, it's hard for me to read this novel ... the author knows too little about the history of his country, the characters are annoying and stupid ... and many other irritating things. If someone has a lot of time can read, if someone expects a good story better to look for another novel.
It’s pretty great, I like their writing technique and how the seem very into what they are writing. A horror concept can be hard to write sometime but they did good.
Can't expect too much fight scenes in this because the MC...is weak. Early interactions with his sister is heartwarming, that's all that is good as of ch30. He has no clear goals right now and so it has become boring (for me). The plot: MC just interacts with sister and friend, trains despite having no improvements, showing off some unique abilities to shock them...the fights aren't exciting at all.The cheat: he gained a system which can possibly upgrade his skills to the max level. The cheat in not practical in the current stage because the mc is weak and poor.
For those wondering I've read to 500 Chps in raws.It's a good story though it does have flaws. But first I strongly recommend you read the other Teacher/Senior Brother Novels first. Like {Master Of Untold Daos}It's really cool seeing him transmigrated into an old body, instead of facing Young Masters, he fights Old Foggies.It's extremely slow progress, we don't get into pills till the 350s. The first arc we find out MC old body regaining his youth back but it stops there. It's just gets very contradictory since the System becomes nonexistence. He's trying to break-through when it's unnecessary [He has the System for that after all.]It's get even weirder when it's mentioned "Will you let your country get trampled by a foreign race?". Which I find pretty stupid because they clearly didn't give a fudge in the beginning and let the world become chaotic. [Yes this novel gets into politics, a royal family which is pretty dam annoying since they're the antagonist/main-subject for over 200 chapters!]This is why I think the Author has his priorities wrong. It no longer feels like a Cultivation novel. I didn't mind the mesh of Wuxia elements at first, it's fine to temper yourself in the mortal world. (Every CN has a mortal arc at least once but this is too much!)The thing that bothers me the most is that even after 500 Chapters, The Author hasn't given anything to the Characters! Just a weapon. That's why I say the System becomes nonexistent. It makes me really sad and have mix feelings about this story.. I don't know what I should expect from this story anymore.