If you ever wanted to continue this, wnmtl.org has a good machine translation of this book, It just has a few incorrect terms n misgenders the mc a lil bit
The first chapters give a promising and thrilling outview and can easily make readers want to read more. The writing style is descriptive and fine and it's a worth to read if you like crime solving
First is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is honestly not that good. There are many grammar and spelling errors, but the novel is still readable and you can still follow the flow, it's a 3.Stability of updates is a solid 5. The author updates every 2 days about, which is good, and consistent, but could be better.The story development is really slow in the beginning, you really have to get past the first 10 chapters for the pace to finally speed up, so it really was kind of a slug reading through the first 10 chapters. It's a solid 4, because afterwards, the story really picks up and gets good.The character design is okay. To be honest, everything is really generic, there really isn't any uniqueness yet, but that's what you expect from a novel in this genre. So a solid 4, as there are ways to make it unique, but that you just didn't do.Finally is the world background, the best part. There are many unique ideas in the world background, even though the frame was a little cliche. I was really surprised by the uniqueness some of the details brought, different from the generic feeling that the other parts of the story have. Definitely a well thought out world.Overall, a pretty average novel. If the chapters were edited or given a proofread, so that the writing quality was better, and the story development was a little faster, one that hooked the reader in, I would have definitely put this book on my recommended list.It's a good book author, with a good idea and a lot of potential. Continue your hard work!
Ive not read it yet this is just so hopefully it can get a star rating but it looks pretty good to me ive seen the first chapter and i like it no large grammer mistakes and sentences seem to flow good, So far like 4.7/5
Amazing story so far, I read blue phoenix aNd loved it, this story Is turning out to be a Great read. easy to read and follow , good characters and an immersive world. Well done
It is best novel I read.MC is good, story good, characters good, world good. It says Harem but it seems like a couple only and doesn't seem to change. I mind either path. But good to know which way story goes. Some repeat of same description of green and red colors at different times for different things. But good writing. also don't forget to have chapter of rest and normal life after fights. I think it would be good.It is great. recommended.
Here is an advanced review, I hope this will also entertain me. Big ups dear author..... ????????????????????????????
Good Development .. Good 5 Star .. ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel
I'm not sure I've ever read an anthology on webnovel...so this novel is a treat. Great characterization and imagination from the writer. I can only recommend this profusely!
Great novel, please continue.I saw that he wasn't very well known, so the story is that the MC's personality is great, so I wanted to pick up on some power stones, and I'm going to tell a few friends about the novel as well.I hope you will continue.