I love it! I love all these villain tropes but they're still being good guys like villains diary and gao fueshai but this has him being a real villain lol so it's got a good kind is darkness to it. please done give it up anytime soon!
Writer changing too many things as story developing. He says mc is level 25, then 1 episode later boom mc is level 19. Completely time waste.
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This is a decent story especially when you consider similar stories. You have a very OP concept in the 'power that contains all things' but has a relatively mild influence on the MC. It is also rarely mentioned or used for anything past the first several chapters from what I have seen. The main good point of the story is that while the MC is fairly OP from the perspective of his peers, there is constant threat of him being strangled in his 'cradle' before he really fully develops. He is always struggling for resources but also finds that his consumption is rather great as well. Now the bad. I realized through reading this story another concept in these Chinese stories that is prevalent and what actually is behind it. The concept where an elder is always telling the jr or protagonist that it will do them more harm then good to know that information, ect.. In reality this is a symptom of China's extreme censorship and information control, as it really not about protecting the individual, but keeping information that could prove problematic to those in power should it be revealed to the masses. Of course China is not the only nation that is guilty of this type of information control, but is probably the most blatant offender.
Why does it need to be 40 characters long, I just wanna give the novel a rating.
A great start can’t wait to see where its going. Somethings in the beginning like the Mc adaptability were a little questionable but you had the fl’s reactions to make up for it. I’d give the beginning a 4.5 out of 5
great start of novel. good character development. though one thing is that there are some cliche scenes. he says he would mind his business but he still goes out of his way to save others.other than character personality everything is good thanks for the novel.
The plot is astonishing, and the characters and the situations have been written very well, This book is full of surprises! Good work author! Best of luck
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Funny and interesting synopsis. Just give the book a try! Good luck to the author, hopefully, there will be consistent updates. All the best. <3
Very Good continue.