Updates are stable. Writing quality is good. Story development is on the right track.lets see how the author make it different from other novels. Character design is also good. Keep the good work.By the way its my first review
"It's okay with me." Nakangiting tugon ng dalaga.
Nang maisara na ang pinto ay napabuntong hininga ang dalaga.
Ichigo stiffened at Nel's statement, at the emptiness of her tone.
"Little One could you get me the Boss."
"Bagaimana mungkin aku memberitahu itu kepadanya? Melihat wajahnya saja aku tidak mampu!" jawabnya dengan keras.
"Am not taking no for an answer "
Yes, it hurt like hell, but she would be damned if she let herself shed more tears over Ning Kuo and her former agency.
MeiLi beware of this Emily b-itch.... Hope she can save herself like she saves others. Well i do love the fact about how she get to know that somebody needs help and she never hesitate to do that.....
"Your parents are coming, so just sit tight, alright? Mei Lin's just outside talking to the doctor. You're gonna be fine, Lian. Don't open your eyes if it hurts."
Meanwhile, an entirely different scene played out on another side of the battlefield.
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