Hello all. I have been a vivid reader of webnovels for a long time. After reading so many fantasy novels, I always wanted to write one of my own. So this is my first try. I know the chapters are small. Trust me they felt longer when I initially wrote them. I will work on the length. Looking for honest reviews.
Flow of the story is a bit jittery, with lack of commas and spacings in some spots. Paragraphing can have a little more work done, because reading a block of texts is never fun.Characters are great, despite the jittery quality of writing you can tell the characters have at least more depth than the skin. World background? Gradual introduction...? Eh, but at least it's somewhat believable, despite the fact that having languages from different worlds be so similar is slightly too unlikely. Unless we are dealing with multiverse type of transmigration/reincarnation.Overall, 4/5 stars. Obviously, English can be improved, but no one is perfect.
Check this one out guys! Maybe you’ll like it just like me LOL.
Please dont drop this novel please please please dont be like those authors that start a great novel but Then stop the novel. please dont be like them
this book fun to follow. interesting storyline makes this book is very good and very easy to understand, interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow, can't wait to continue reading this book
Good book I’m just wondering when you’ll start uploading again.
Two years is a long time to stay in one place you are not familiar with. I sympathize with Eleand for being human, and powerless? I hope things will start looking up for him soon. I can't wait to follow him on his adventure.
It is nice and all for a newbie to read, BUT FOR NOOBS ONLY!!!It is worse than you thought. Other than the frequency of updates, nothing is worth our time in this novel. The goes like cramming you full of nonsense and it is extremely fast paced and it is worse than I thought. I repeated worse than I thought a lot already and it just shows how worse it is. Be careful folks in reading this novel. And may God bless us all.
such a good novel love it please keep posting....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................xd
If this mc turns out to be cold ruthless and calculating then we might have a similarity to warlock of magus world.Which would be a good thing cuz that was a good novel. Long story short if he goes bad with good reason miggt be goodGoes bad with stupid reason and the author screws a good plotGoes bad properly turns good. Half-asses it and it turns crappyWell cheerio Ps. I haven't actually read the book yet but looking forward to it
once again trash but what can I expect from a trial read need to get to 140iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisissisisisisisisisisissisksksisksksksksissk
Who's the author of this fcking piece of ****!!!! ....... wasted my time fckerr!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!??!!!!!!!!!!!!¡