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It’s a copy of a original book ”myriad realms grand manager with a god class system” it’s been out close to 2 years now and has been on hiatus for 5 months now 5 stars so people see this
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Writing is okay, there are some areas where grammar is lacking making it hard to understand. The setting is your generic apocalypse scenario, system and all. The story is wierd, and I cant decide if its fast or slow paced. Each chapter has action and conflict but is somehow takes ages to resolve. Eg chapters 10 thru 17 are spent on a single conflict and with the length of the chapters thats alot of words for what amounts to taming a spider and fighting one man. The mc is disappointing. At the very least I expect the author to keep their mcs personality and decisions consistent with their purported backstory but I guess thats too much to ask here. Tldr. He's a rich kid that spent his life living up to his parents expectations. He has no friends, he's bullied blah blah, u know the usual edgy template we see everywhere nowadays. Problem is as soon as the apocalypse starts, he goes full sociopath. I mean cmon at least show some disgust or emotion after you bash your roomates head in other than catharsis. His subsequent interactions with individuals and internal monolouge come off as hasty, compulsive, comedic, whimsical even. This is not how someone shunned by society acts in any scenario. Of course, when the plot calls for it, he will magically start exhibiting traits and thoughts owing to his absuive upbringing if only to skew the story in a particular direction.
The fact that this novel was hard for me to find shows how bad Webnovel’s book promotion system is. They constantly try to get to read terrible books that have a trillion bad reviews but then never reccomend me books that are good like this one.Although I don’t have the time or patience for a full review, this book is a truly well made book, especially for this site. The concept is unique and interesting, the characters are generally well thought out and the MC eventually starts to move away from constantly relying on the system. I also like how the MC doesn’t just know the absolute best path for everything and is kinda dumb at times, because it makes it a little more relatable and interesting.Anyways, give the book a try if you haven’t already!
I love this book! I love that the FL is very strong and can take care of herself and isn't a damsel in distress that can't do anything for herself. I really dislike damsel in destress FLs. I love the story profession. It really captures my attention and it makes me want to know what the next chapter is right away.
Thanks Author for this story. I am particularly intrigue by the world builing here and system description. From the realm eg emperor, immortal etc to the levels of blood line awakening stages and connection.
1. The first part with regards to Kain, sheila and Alex that is narrated well making way for alex anger and his want for revenge
2. The second part where the 3 brothers passed down what they have to Alex -through the merging of bloodline and knowledge, i enjoyed that best - very detailed and vivid in the description of the process.
3. The sarcasm comments between Alex and Camilla i laugh at most with Grace playing peace maker in between their small arguments
4. look forward to see what tribulations Alex have to face given what the brothers predicted given Alex’s strong bloodline awakening reaction - Will he survive n succeed in his cultivatimg journey?
In summary i enjoyed the read. good work on detailing out the background realm, stages and how each clan and level work within the system. look forward to what’s next. Good job ?
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I have really enjoyed this book. Story is about a guy who is a human robot hybrid that can control machines. One journey through a wormhole later he discovers a world of magic and dragons goblins etc... MC is a "bit" more overpowered than is strictly necessary (that is one sentence I never thought I would type seriously) overall it has the excitement you would hope for while reading the book description. Pros:overpowered mcGreat writing qualityGreat action scenesCharacters are believableCons:Author makes MC too powerful early in the story I expect to see some classic plot devices later on into the story to make up for this problem.The actual technology building mechanics and in depth planning are somewhat lacking.Overall I found it to be an amazing story definitely worth checking out!
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