this is probably the most life-changing piece of art I've ever experienced. From my current angle of thinking, It's not good or bad, it just exists. An instant favourite from me, right up there with TWIM in terms of impact. And obviously, this rating is subjective to change. Who knows, I might put it at a 0 or 10 moments from now. But THAT'S the point.
i love love love this book and hope that the author doesn't drop it and continues it this story is very good so far just hope that the author doesn't nerf the mc.
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
If you found this story recommended to just go and read it, because the way the story start and continue to go on is one of its kind it have all the world’s fantasies , the characters description is amazing and with that you can tell that this writer is put his best to make story good for so why not sick with it to end you wont regret it!!
a very good fanfiction, I highly recommend it, a good idea, I hope to continue reading chapters............................ ...............???
so far(Ch42) the novel is pretty good compared to many other novels. The mc's attitude(calm and not stupid/naive) and the world background are interesting. without saying to much spoilers. The mc needs to go through trials in a trial world. the trials are in tiers and the mc is one of the lucky ones to be the 1st tier. Hope the novel stays good as so far it looks like a newly formed gem that just needs time
Continue.
I really like this authors work, in a short he flushed put his charectors and world, I do hope he expands on the world a bit more
While the prologue is a little slow, Chapter 1 jumps into action quickly. I'd like to see a little more of the boy before he recovers. I think the contrast between the inflicted boy and the astute man would make for terrific character development. However, the ML comes across as strong and wise, someone I'd be willing to follow. I particularly appreciated how much the father cared for the boy and the efforts he took to protect him. Keep writing. This story has a lot of room for development and surprising twists and turns.
it's amazing 10/10 recommend, i loved the introduction of your plot it started as fun and games and now suddenly he became master, whats more intresting is writing style it's impressive, keep it up.
Things why this novel is at top of my apocalypse genre novel list.1. The world background is really detailed and logically explained, the name mutagen really is well suited.2. Anti-hero Protagonist who only helps people when he wants something out of it, it's convenient or just plain easy for him.3. Updates every day with a new chapter.4. The type of evolution that the zombies and mutants follow is very unique and has a good variety to them.5. The MC makes rational decisions. And always tries to see a way to benefit himself or his team.6. Loved the power which the MC possesses in the apocalypse, never seen it before in apocalypse novel.Overall it's an amazing apocalypse novel and it will be a great experience for all. It just has some Gore and scenes of mature content so read at your own discretion.Author really impressed with the novel, the quality of the chapters, and the one chapter per day update is really appreciated. Thanks for writing this novel and keep up the great work, i appreciate it. ??