Honestly this novel has a lot of potential, it could be up there in the future with author's pov, But as of now it could get a lot better. Author you should put more weight into your story, for example we never knew how many students are actually attending the academy or how many teachers are teaching what subjects and how the educational system actually works, and for being called the 'best' academy it's a little bit weird how a mere C-rank could become a teacher, considering that they are teaching nobility, you know like... Noble households that are probably filled with S or SS rank members. You could also expand the main cast, I think 3-5 characters is a little bit on the small side but it wouldn't an issue if they get enough character development
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Me emociona este libro, es sencillamente maravilloso. A medida que lo leo no puedo evitar preguntarme como es que yo no había escuchado de él antes. Maravilloso, sigue así
I have read all the chapters that are free and ... What can I say? I have been fascinated with each chapter of this novel. I don't have enough words to describe how wonderful this novel is.I can see the love you have given the novel. Keep it up.
Great novel keep it up author.Also I like your other novel so update that too...............................................................
I like this book, the best part about this book so far is the relationship b/tw Vi and Keen, and I also like the fact that the MC doesn't have the cliche class of warrior or something along those lines???, that his class is kinda vampire based
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Don't mind the stars, read the review.This novel is the third novel of the Eternal Series. It is a sci-fi cultivation, virtual world, novel filled with countless treasure and monster hunts. This novel doesn't include a harem, and it is Power Couple-based novel. The main character seems mature but he is not. This novel will include Eastern plus Western myths with hundreds of sci-fi hypotheses.Everything in this novel is fictional, so don't compare it with the outside world, even if it is real.I'll re-write another review after two volumes. And even if you find it uninteresting in earlier chapters, give it a try until it's free. You might change your view.
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