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TLDR: interesting novel due to the cast of the Villainess and her plotting rather than the MC that is worth a read even with its weak points.The story is moving at an acceptable pace. The most interesting character in the novel is not the MC but the villainess. The MC is boring and uninteresting at the moment. The story has been progressing because of the Villainess’ machinations… which is understandable as the story unfolds. However, I hope the MC actually becomes something more than what he is currently and sooner rather than later. I’m not asking for him to flip a switch overnight. I just would want the MC to have some actual character progression and interesting introspection and inner growth rather than being prodded along from the Villainess. There is only so much “weak smiles” or “smiling bitterly” I can take from this MC before I throw up my hands and move on from this story. Also, let’s not make the MC too much of an oblivious dolt for too long, eh? Just my opinion as it can get old fast depending on how much the author leans on the cliché comedic bit. Overall, will continue to follow the novel as long as it moves forward with MC growth and interesting Villainess.
I can say this proudly, the book's nice. Although I'm still a few chapters in, it was enough to make me want to keep reading. It has a good pace, little to no errors, good scenes with room for cough cough disappointing the other characters' expectations... in d book.It's worth the read and time. Enjoy and Goodluck author!
I have only read a few chapters and can tell that it has good grammar. As someone who has read many ero-novels. I can tell this is gold even though it will have NTR. I sincerely wish the writer to not stop uploading the chapters regularly. Thanks for a great novel. ??????
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Useless system.... plot make no sense... and author really love to **** his own MC... like many other useless system in this WN... and plot progresss make no sense of which and which direction it should do...
I absolutely love this book, and I will add them to my collection to follow up. Thank you very much for the wonderful story! The book cover is interesting too! :)
The backround story isn´t bad I hope later it answered why the MC was able to get back in time. And the MC is likeable but I wonder why when his family is so much worth to him why he doesn´t talk to his sister.Bad points are :- The author makes the MC with quest rewards so OP but then scale the opponent in his level range up so that the MC has to take effort to kill them. He totally forgot what this would mean if other players would to fight against such opponents.- You could forget at minimum one digit in all stats, hp etc.-To often are the stats of the MC postet and the fights mostly are damage report.
Barely any cliches, good grammar, updates good, bunch of free chapters, all characters feel unique, captivating plot that makes me wonder "will this happen or is he this"
I had of fun to read this amazing story the MC is op but that doesn't make the story boring or bad but in my opinion better. The update quality is really good with at least 1 chapter per day .The length of the chapters are pretty good and satisfying.All Main characters are properly developed and are still gaining experience and development.The writing quality is above what is normal in webnovel With little to no grammatical mistakes All in all a satisfying experience to read and I'm thrilled to read what happens nextPs: English is not my main language so sorry for any grammatical mistakes
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