I LEGIT cannot get enough of this. This became my Wednesday addiction for real. I am officially addicted. The first part was GENIUS, and the second part is getting me soooooooo hyped and excited ugh, I need more, I need the next Wednesdays. I loved P and I loved A, and I loved to learn who they were and how they were connected in real life, and how this is gonna work. See you next Wednesday, because I am obsessed!
I've been reading this novel since last year and the story just keeps getting better.Can't wait for Lin moyu to meet antares.The updates also regular.Translation is decent
So far good. Interesting story and nice grammar.
great sm*t novel grammer is bad sometimes all over nice novel
The novel really depicted your effort of writing. I can imagine characters well. The chemistry and plot both are nice. You are doing a great job. Keep updating more .
This novel is well-written thus far, and I think it has potential to become a good novel to read. From the first 24 chapters, the novel's strongest aspect is the quality of the writing and the balancing of the characters. I feel like the achievements of each character is realistic with the setting, though the value of the currency is unclear and I do question how realistic buying a high-end vr machine is with the wage of a convenience store worker. Going into the future, I think that, so long as it continues with this level of quality and power scaling, this will become one of the better vr novels, however, if the power scaling isn't done well, it'll be a generic novel that doesn't stand out. I'd also like a bit more world building, but it's not urgent, since it's not a main focus of the novel.
Its start is unique compared to all the other DBZ fan fics I've read. I'd recommend it to ppl. For those ppl who read reviews before checking out a story the MC doesn't start on planet vageta nor earth so check it out.
Finally I've finished 21 chapters, and still waiting for more. Every chapter is so overwhelming that I can't resist to read a chapter. Good luck Author.
Thank you everyone who read this webnovel of mine. It was my first attempt at a short story. When I started, I wanted to produce a story that was nine chapters long and with every second chapter focused on one of the support characters. Also, I wanted to keep it between fifteen thousand and twenty thousand words so as it could be read in one day and hopefully on sitting. Finally, I wanted to complete it in four days (not including days which I took off to work on other stories). I achieved all those goals so I’m happy. If you enjoyed my webnovel, please provide a review.
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For now I find this novel very good: The MC has tragic past we still don't know. The first Arc (until chapter ~30) seems to be the prologue and it was very good.Concerning MC past I like the fact that he seems to have a close relationship in the past with a girl but end up separated cause of some event. It give some new vibes different from other novels in the romance part.Again a good work from you author, I am updated on Death Guns which I find excellent too. I hope you will keep up updating Death Guns and now Crimson Overlord cause I love both of them.
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