it has great potential though, keep grinding
After reading the first chapter, I feel that the author has buried a few plots within it, and it's making me curious to find out more.Looking forward to knowing the characters better <3 Keep posting~
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Only a few chapters so far but it's great. I like the fact that it was set in the 17th century. It adds to the intrigue. Nice book, I recommend!❤
hi guys! I am the author of this book. this book will not continue further. iIstopped posting because it wasn't receiving enough popularity and now, even after getting contracted, I regret my decision of stopping this novel. anyways, if y'all liked this novel, you can check out the other novels of mine too! it's name is 'the brutal ceo'. thanks for all the support! and sorry for stopping this wholesome novel so suddenly.
While the character interactions are well-developed, the pacing of the story could be more balanced, as some scenes feel slower than necessary. Additionally, expanding on world-building details could enhance immersion. Strengthening the main plot’s direction will also help keep readers more invested in long-term developments.
it's definitely an interesting story. Has a great start.
The hints of world background that we get are paint a picture of a mildly dystopian world and I really like where this is goingCharacters feel real, if irritating sometimes (but that's part of what makes them feel real!) and the designs are varied and interesting. None of the names feel out of place considering the settingStory is going places. This shit bangsWriting quality. It's pretty good, but the formatting makes me feel funky, like the underscores on either side of text to indicate thoughts? Not the greatest fan, but I'm probably gonna keep reading this.Overall? It's fire, go give it a try
???????????☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ couldn't help myself☺️ Thats one bold move there, author??? keep up d good work
f...k you villain tag ... fu.k you brother
this actually seems really interesting and has great potential. it's on an event for New books, so there are only limited chapters but so far it's good, and the writing quality is well above others. I will definitely have this one for later!!! right from the start you can feel the tension in the air, and I hope to see her growth as well as her gain, as she starts out as spoiled, but that is not a reason to wrong her like they do. keep it up and in hope you finish it. I'll keep it on my list to read. Readers- give it a try! Author- good luck!!!
Started reading this book after reading the synopsis and thought this could be interesting...and I WAS RIGHT. It starts off at a climax and then your like wait what. it is funny with crazy characters which made me continue reading waiting on next chapter release for the day.