I like this novel. It reminds me of Gourmet of Another World and dungeon supplier. The only problem is that it needs more chapters. More. More
I originally read from the translator that this was supposed to be a better, more interesting novel... What the ****? This mindless, copy-pasted garbage is not worth a spit. The usual main overpowered, all-knowing main protagonist. The usual cast of retarded villans and brain-dead supporting characters. Garbage.
The novels in this new trial batch look pretty good i have not read any of them yet but from the descriptions alone they all seem pretty unique or at least have a good concept maybe except the pet one
Great Story...I recommend giving it a read if you like the kind of novels that emphasizes on the battle between good and evil, the novel is a roller coaster ride of magical elements with religious touches, all in all it's great.
chapters seems too short and story doesn't seemed to move up. It feels like while watching slideshow of pictures even before reaching the end you get stuck somewhere in middle. Seems unreasonable to wait day or two then purchase coins/passes to unlock a chapter and after end of each chapter feel like got kicked in stomach. Please either Increase how much story develops in single chapter or request application finance team to decrease cost for coin and increasing power of passes as at most single pass unlocks single chapter that gives readers nothing but fillers between main events.It would be nice to have one pass unlock multiple chapters.
One day, your just minding your own business and you see a piece of candy and you're like " oh! A piece of candy!" And you eat it because you're a badass who does what they want ? little did you know BAM! You're the son-in-law to a dragon now. Does this mean you'll become a dragon too? Will you ever eat candy again? Is your dragon wife at least hot? Find out next time on Dragon ba- oh wait fu-- (cuts off into black screen)
note- I am a big amateur when it comes to writing reviews.but I will still give it a try.1. My Favorite part of this novel was the writing quality. I think that the author put a fair amount of work pleasing the readers with his writing capabilities which he absolutely did.2. As you all may know, the story revolves around a protagonist who got transmigrated into a game that he used to play. and the bad news is that he got put into the body of a person who got NTRed which explains the title. The story revolves a lot about fighting and a lot of cuckolding (not the mc whos doing the cuckolding because he is actually the one getting cucked but ofc its part of the development of the story).one of the key factors on why the novel got such a bad rating is because of how inconsistent the updates and development were. I can clearly understand that some people are just getting mad because of how slow the story is, and that is where the inconsistency comes into role. imo, if you are going to try writing a slow-paced story, I would recommend uploading more chapters per week. 1 chapter per week is not really ideal if you want your story to be highly rated and so on. It may be because the author has some work to do irl and because it is only a hobby but it may have been a bit better to upload a bit more than once per week. (for example villain cultivator, endless path infinite cosmos etc)I actually got a bit confused about the choices of the protagonist considering that he has played the game before and why he did not make use of his knowledge. I mean, if he did not even have knowledge about the game why would we readers even need the 'useless' information? I mean should he not have a bit of an advantage so that he does not start from "scratch"?I wont really pick on the protagonists development because I actually considered the amount of chapters it has unlike those people complaining about why the protagonist is such a wuss and so on.overall it is decent and it couldve had a better, overall "look" to it if it was less slow paced but thumbsup for the author.
are the 5 star reviews here bought by the author? or just botsthis fanfic is so bad, it's like an unfinished script writing quality 1 star- i suggest using grammarly author, if you want to better the quality of it story development 1 star- just a copy paste of canon, only difference is the mc gets additional abilities for doing easy taskscharacter design 1 star- the author wrote the mc as a dollar store Saitama, rest is 4 stars
ehhh...kenapa MC sangat lemah.. apa gunanya mall sistem jika MC tidak dugunakan.. saya yakin banyak misi yang sudah terselesaikan (seingat saya)
this novel is one of the newer ones but it has so much more potential to be a great novel. i especially like the steady plotline. thx for the chapters
Same old chinese urban novel that you've probably read a million times before..........................................................................
next pls....hopefully there will be turn of tides...the insults that Archer slapped on Paris about beig the unwanted meal will come back to him & it will be Paris turn to say such...what an arsehole of a husband