The Author is just having fun. There are some really great stories. In the Travel Arc, they bring all to Harems Moms and Dads to Tortus and experience Hajime Journey. It is really good stuff. You have a story are on a non Harem member clearing a dungeon, funny stuff. Date Night with the Broke Rabbit. Just some stuff, when you do not want to read a whole story that you can chill for an hour on, and come back later.
I don't why but I feel like the introduction part of the novel especially the game is like a carbon copy of a certain novel..or is it just me?Hopefully it will become unique in a few chapters...
why does this mc cares so much of what others think and being competitive like why? i like the premise of drop rates but the story might not be just right for me. I cant recommend this one if youre looking for a light hearted story. its too convoluted of ideas that never sticks.
Amazing honestly, can't get enough of the book, from the start to where I stopped, I have always been on the edge of my seat.
your writing is so descriptive and very fluent, minimal grammatical error as well. I'd recommend it to anyone really
The world is actually very interesting...The really interesting part is how it feels real, invertive seems like a uniquely authentic character.
Im kinda getting tired of all the Secrecy. When is the family going to know that he isnt a normal kid? Also when are you going to do a time skip? He’s been young for to long!Stop dragging it out, Its starting to get annoying and boring ?
Everyone is stupid. There are almost no exceptions. Everyone he interacts with is some combination of irresponsible, childish, or has anger management issues. The only ones that aren't like this are the irrelevant characters that exist for a single chapter.
Average novel. I dropped it because the characters felt bland and emotionless. The character interactions were pretty minimal and not well done. The main character also felt pretty bland and is basically a meathead that doesn't seem too smart...
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Well done n congratulations, but u can't wait for the text episode please send it fast please . The story is top class and every step takes is perfect
copy-paste of "The first order"... It's a bit sad to see people obviously copying other works... I mean, it's okay if the MC'S ability is the same, but there, the "author" copied even the personality of the characters, their bonds... it's a bit too much... This said, it's a copy of a great work, so it's good for those who didn't read the original.
honestly i really liked the world building (im not good at english so spare me). it's kinda rushed from chapter 1 but i have no problem with it, and im saying again that i liked the world building because we can see that there are lot's of genius out there and every character have their own past and present. and i liked the kain and arthur's friendship. so please author continue writing it.