good story just wondering if you have a discord?
Who writes this, a chimpanzee?? They make spell check apps that will correct mistakes for God sake...
The storyline is well paced and the slight slow build up makes the premise and the characters real. The author updates the story regularly and I have high hopes for this.
Hello, my dear reader! Author here! smile☺️ Just wanted to say that it's my first time to write about system but this focuses in romance, though a bit slow burn. So I would like to give some spoiler.There would be a lot of tension between the characters. Heavy atmosphere in some scenes but there would be humor here and there. There could be twisted feelings and identity revelation in the later chapters. Sexiness is certain. ?
Can we just talk about how vividly this entire pottery class sequence is written? The author doesn't just describe a kindergarten art class — they build an entire world in one room. Let me start with the opening image: Pearl seeing Little Mud's Candy Planet hair ties. Pluto and Andromeda Nebula designs — available only to royal princesses — while Pearl only has Earth and Moon. This ONE detail establishes the entire class hierarchy of this kindergarten without a single exposition dump. The hair ties ARE the worldbuilding. Then the pottery scene itself: "a complex and magnificent antler seemed to come alive, growing out of Little Mud's palm." The imagery here is almost sacred. A three-year-old creating something that stuns adults, teachers, and the principal. The contrast between Little Mud's natural talent and the wealthy children's material offerings (gemstone flying chess, diamond tiaras, actual Porsche toy cars) paints this world in one stroke. The changing room scene where Yin Xuetong finds her dress ruined — "My dress! My most beautiful dress!" — the sensory details are sharp. The gray-black clay patches on snow-white fabric, the wailing, the teachers' panic about compensation. And then the surveillance footage threat hanging over everyone like a sword. The atmosphere shifts from bright and wonderous (the antler creation) to tense and claustrophobic (the accusation scene) to devastating (Dou Siyi breaking down). The author controls mood like a filmmaker controls lighting.
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Video Games Grades/Tiers :
"Apa yang akan menjadi taruhan kita?"
Chiyo: I understand why you two look so much alike.
"Pain~pain~go away~" The boy chanted as he caressed her back and the girl stopped crying…
You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
"It's just that… this was the only way…"