Good is fun and interesting, I have read some of this authors other work and it is somewhat similar to that.Anyone know what character the title picture is supposed to be? Wondering for research purposes ;)
I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 starsI want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 starsI want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars
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1 character = 4 names. alot of it LOL.1 character = 4 names. alot of it LOL.
Reading a gaming novel without game elements sucks. No info about hsi character, items and other things. Why dodn't he choose Magical or Fanthasy instead of Video Games. Why is MMORPG in the title? What's more... I could barely read these chapters, this is too boring.
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This is a cringe worthy novel the author has out done himself. Why most of the VR novels are so bad? It's like I dont't even know....
Pretty good start but gets quite boring quite fast/makes me lose interest.
One thing I genuinely appreciate about this book is that every character has a distinct voice and the author doesn't waste time establishing it. Tangxi Xuan is immediately recognizable—the shameless brother who clings to legs, calls himself a servant dramatically, and is obsessed with sword flight. His dialogue is fast, playful, and slightly unhinged. Tang Ximo's voice is different—she can be casual and modern ('I definitely won't be picky anymore') but also carries this weight of someone who has lived a thousand years. When she speaks to her family about cultivation, there's a measured quality to her words that shows she's carefully choosing what to reveal. The parents are the best written though. Xu Wanqing's lines are warm and practical—'The vegetable patch was just watered with manure this afternoon—it's filthy'—she's concerned about dirt, not her daughter's supernatural powers. Tangxi Hua's humor is dry and understated. And the dialogue between the parents themselves, holding hands, the whole sickeningly sweet couple energy—they have their own rhythm that's completely separate from the siblings. The narration itself has a great voice too, with these little asides like 'Those at the bottom of the family hierarchy should speak less!' that give the whole thing a warm, slightly irreverent tone. It reads like someone telling you about their family at a dinner party.
I don't always write reviews, but I feel like I had to for this novel. Despite all the praise this novel received, I couldn't even read past chapter 20. Here's why.First and foremost, the translation and update stability is top notch. Now to the main problem. The story have way too many plot holes. For example, he came from Earth to another world that is only similar to Earth, yet he assumed that everything is the same, especially herbs and other ingredients. He's a scientist, yet he magically possessed the ability to make realistic drawings of different herbs. Moreover, events just popped out of nowhere to force the plots. A beggar telling you he's good at making drugs, so you just hire him without any testing, make him your chief drug refiner, and give him a 50% share of your business?The MC is a normal scientist, he got pickpocketed. He got helped by someone to catch the thief, then he suddenly invited him into making a business contract because he can smell herb from that guy? Not to mention his follower literally got pulled away against her will to become an immortal out of nowhere. Two paragraphs later, it's as if he's already forgotten about her, and everything is back to normal. Was this so the author doesn't have to bother writing about the interaction with the girl?All in less than half a chapter. Does that even make sense? Then some assassin tried to poison him with the poison from a tree with heavy smell? He, a normal person who just suffered from a fail attempt at opening meridians, was careful enough to smell a cup of water in his room before drinking? Moreover, just as the Lords were talking about how to deal with him, he showed up for absolutely no particular reason. Why? There are no reason at all for him to show his face. The author was too lazy to write something like "the lord invited him
the Novel is really great!! Thank you so much for your creativity, it was the perfect novel for me at the moment but you see im actually just a free reader here, so I just feel unfortunate to not be able to follow through the book but thank you anyway.
'Gougou Zizhu Xieyi'—the contract of servitude. The title alone is a gut punch. But what struck me most about this whole section isn't just the plot mechanics of Xu Qiao trapping Pei Jinchuan; it's the deeper question the story is asking about power, dependency, and what it means to be chosen. The dog metaphor runs through everything. Pei Sunian literally offers to sell him, Xu Qiao calls him a dog when she gives him the excuse for choosing him, and he internally refers to himself as 'a dog trampled underfoot.' But here's the thing—the story keeps complicating this metaphor. A dog is loyal. A dog is grateful. A dog chooses to stay. And Pei Jinchuan, despite every reason to resist, signs. The contract itself is loaded with symbolism: no female peers allowed, all free time spent in her house, complete submission to her summons. It's control disguised as care, dependency dressed up as sponsorship. The author keeps flipping between showing us how humiliating this is and how desperately Pei Jinchuan wants it anyway. When he reads the surveillance video of his foster mother and realizes Xu Qiao saved her too, his heart quickens, his cheeks grow warm, his breath turns hot. The text describes it as 'an overwhelming sense of excitement and suffocation.' That's the theme right there—rescue and entrapment are the same thing when the power imbalance is this extreme. And Xu Qiao? She's not even cruel for fun. She's calculating. The narrative makes it clear: 'What she wanted was to control Pei Jinchuan, fundamentally cutting off any possibility of him coming into contact with Xu Rou.' This isn't about helping someone. It's about possession. But then the text also shows us moments of genuine care—the ointment, the hospital, the single pair of chopsticks she leaves for him. So is she a villain or a protector? Or is the story suggesting that in this world, those two things are indistinguishable?