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Just completed reading this novel and thought I might leave a review. At first glance, it seems like a normal op system urban novel where the mc gets overpowered quickly, but it isn’t. The system acts more of a guide or coach, granting certain powers but nowhere near as overpowered as in other novels. Kind of an interesting take in the genre which I appreciated. About the characters, I found them to be more 3D, fleshed out and real than I expected which was refreshingly nice. The MC is rational, knows his limits and isn’t trying to be a savior in every situation. I liked the interactions between the characters as it generally didn’t feel forced. Regarding the plot and the world background, I thought it could use a little more work. The time skips sometimes were pretty abrupt and I got confused what was happening sometimes. Same thing with world background: it is developed to an extent, but I feel like there were missing pieces by the novel was finished. On that note, the ending was somewhat abrupt and felt like a lot wasn’t resolved. Overall, the readability (grammar, punctuation,etc) was pretty good. There’s definitely potential in this novel and although I do think there’s room to improve, I did enjoy reading it. My favorite interactions were between mc and fl. Looking forward to more novels!
Getting better everday as someone already said the update frequency is sulerb the author is still a bit green but this work surpasses that!!!!!!!!!
I love this story. It written with consistent quality and i am in love with the world and characters that the author put in it. I cannot wait for more!
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If you're going to make your MC a stereotype at least stick with it like it feels like he wants and pursues trouble.
- - - - 200 chapter review - - - -Take into account:- The novel is written by a guy like you or me, not a Japanese manga team.- The Author gets paid by people’s donations and stones, and with that has written hundreds of chapters.Negatives;- The first part of the novel (up to 56-80ish) is riddled with errors and inconsistencies, often dramatically breaking the feeling of immersion. It gives the impression that the Author was personally just scrapping by with his novel, and not thinking everything through.- The first portion also is pretty cliché in its story, (but would yours be better? ?u200d♂️).- Lots of the later chapters are premium, but that’s typical with novels now, the chapters also vastly vary in size at that point.Positives:- For being a video game plot, the story elements come across as fresh, even with the cliché under-developed presentations.- Even though typical ‘emotional bait’ was used, I couldn’t help but get really angry and involved in the negative events happening to the MC. Mostly I felt more invested in the MC’s real life than in his game life, which is fine! ?- The writing quality of the later chapters really improves and you can’t help but realize that the Author actually has great talent. ((Good job Author))- I didn’t think this would be another ‘daily addiction’ novel by the time I finished, but I was wrong. —-((AUTHOR: Don’t take what people say here so seriously, the positive or the negative. You just write the story for yourself and find some irl buds to get your positive feedback from. Humans with the internet’s anonymity will say some awful, hateful things, without thinking twice. Plus, the internet has some mentally messed up people who get angry for no reason. Personally I have some cool friends through board games, there are usually local clubs most places. The goal being finding people who you can relate to without a screen between you.))
1) translations after 40 sucks.2) it takes 2 tickets to unlock a trash translation chapter.3) since it's like this I can only say good bye.
5 stars only for countering people that vote 1 star for no fucking reason, it's a cultivation story you cant put 1 star because it has harem or not but alas, some people are retarded@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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This MC is 100% a masochist. He likes to be abused. He likes to be exploited. All in all, he just likes to be stepped on. Used, and discarded.
This Novel is quite good but they should now stop spamming this this type of story.Story is interestingMC cheat allow him change his beast's bloodline e.t.cranking system in this Novel is quite ez to understand.I definitely recommend this book.