A very good premise at the start.
The world building and update stability are quite good, but I have to admit that I find the character design and story development severely lacking.
The MC is naive to the point of stupidity up to chapter 100. He gets conned and betrayed to easily imo, not to mention the constant repeat mistakes. He talks to himself 80% of the time, and half of that is to remind himself not to repeat past mistakes. Yet, a few chapters later, he will be berating himself again that he is stupid and repeating his errors. The MC can be borderline stupid, but blatantly saying and repeating how stupid the MC is every 10 or so chapters, does not bode well for the book. At least make him seem smart is what I'm trying to say.
The story development was fine, even when he was masquerading as a woman for 70% of it (sweat) ?. But, that bomb drop at chapter 99 was too huge! I will be honest, I couldn't really tell who the target audience was for half the book. But it was interesting enough to stop me from investigating. The reason for this is quite simple, 99% of male audience can read novels about male MCs turning into animals, insects, ghosts etc. But to have them transgender is a huge taboo. I understand that it's 2022 and the lines are somewhat blurred nowadays. But, if you are writing a novel targeted at MALE audience, you SHOULD NOT transgender the MALE MC and LITERALLY put that he lost himself. It's too much, my brother.
I literally had to back pedal at chapter 99 and check if this novel had an LGBTQ tag that I somehow missed. I even had to question myself and ask if I was being misguided for reading those 99 chapters. That's just how big an impact your chapter 99 had on me. I don't think that the sequence of events leading up to it were intentional, but the end result was questionable to say the least.
At least, that's my two cents on those two issues. Otherwise, the book is readable and I would recommend it to female readers, or those who don't mind the blurred lines.
Overall, I give this book 3.8 out of 5 but that's mainly for the writing quality, world building, and the somewhat unconventional plot. The MC setting and plot progression seems quite sketchy imo though.
P.S. Please allow the MC to do ghostly things. You promised ghosts, so you should give ghosts.
An action hero in a game world is something I haven't seen before and I'm confused how no one has come up with this combination before. The premise aside this story is very well written and the characters are all nicely written too.
Great Job Thanks for the constant releases and good quality!!
em 4 capitulos a obra foi de legivel a lixo, e nao duvido nada que esse romance seja escolhido, cada dia que passa a qualidade so decai, pena.
This is my first work and many mistakes are expected. I personally recommend you guys to not read this and I'm very much honored if you did. It felt like reading an embarrassing diary of my puberty xD. There are a lot of problems that had yet to be fixed too and I'm pretty much occupied with my new novel and another one that had yet to be published.
A 5 stars review bc I already know this will be a story I‘m going to be crazy about !!!! ??? You can’t be wrong when you pick this author’s book ! I’m looking forward to see how narcissistic our little alpha became and what will happen to him !!!
I think it will be a good readafter reading the synopsis I found the mc's abilities quite similar to Zhang Laoshi who could tame any bast thanks to the library of heavens path in his MIND.now take this
Felt important so i think i should talk about this. i know how important the mc of the story can be, some people do not like Azriel, so here are his character traits. -he kills innocents. -he is naive and reckless. -he likes to fight and get stronger.-he does not like to read.of course, it will change in the future, he will be the one who leads the empire, a leader can't be a Brute who doesn't think anything. He will change and get better. Actually, he is already a lot better than before within 30ish chapters and will keep on improving as the story progress. please be patient with him and me. hmm hmm, that's all i wanted to say. I hope have a great time reading.
How the heck an immense trash novel have more than 1000 chapters and a good one only a few 100? After reading only 2 chapters my pulse got to 100,how stupid is that mc? 100 bip,120 bip,130 bip blablabla blablabla blablabla
a wonderful story about someone truly growing from pain and torment he has decided that no matter what the consequence may be wether death or pain he will hold to the lifestyle that he's chosen and the principles that he believes in truly respect the character great book and it's got some funny moments too
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MC is actually playing Osu!nothing to see here guys... move along. ...................................................................................