Writing quality is mixed. Most of the storie is well written, but I can barely read the combat scenes.Updates are near consistently dayly exept this month with 2 updates in 26 days.The storie develops fine though sometimes it is a litle clunky. The Caracter design seems to be above average, though the MC seems not that deep as of chapter 35. (Simple minded "I want to be strong to search my dead and because I embaress my family...") but there seems to be room for growth.The world seems like the classical Invaded by foreign beings through portals, but there are hints on some depth beyond that in the human sosciety.
Racist trash. Typical can do no wrong MC where even if he's the one to mess up others are punished for it. MC's country is an analogue for China and the story really suffers for it.
Ehem this is the bestest book you'll read i promiseYou know its gonna be funny its gonna be heart breaking you'll even understand the meaning of life here This is my fist book but not the last enjoy this
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled(Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
Got boring fast. Don't get me wrong, it was interesting at first, but then he found the perfect cultivation methods, obtained a spiritual bone, and upgraded his talent to high. Now what?
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Jii, i can't stop reading this.I hope the author update more.I never liked such stories. But this one is worth reading.Impatiently waiting for more updatelovely author❤
worst novel ever don't read it it is worst and un human nature just like the title empifiys read on if want to get dead brain cells and emotional damage ? and suicide toughs
before I start this, just wanna know if its harem?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Starting this review, I have to say that the premise of the story is very interesting and fairly original so kudos to you!Overall Rating 3⭐:Good read. You may want to wait until there are more chapters. Rating: World background 3⭐: What you expect is what you get. The world the MC transmigrates to is a hentai-dating-sim whith heavy emphasis on Martial Arts, where if you if you are not perfect to a girl...well NTR is in the title. Character design3⭐: Not much to be said really, most characters in genuine dating sims come off as stale and one-dimensional so expectations are kinda low. As for the MC...The concept is not necessarily bad. Reading about a weak-willed individual finding his way and tackling his problems in such an absurd scenario could be enthralling, but due to how the story is written in first person the MC comes across like a dumb crybaby, especially in the latest "Do you have a dream?" arc. Seriously it's like he can't think for himself at all. Story development 4⭐: The story is captivating with mysteries,twists and heavy emotions thrown into the mix. It may be a bit of a mess at the beginning with moral and logical inconsistencies but I find it mirrors the MC's **yche so it's okay. What is not okay though is the lack of interaction between the MC and the netorare girl. Chapter 47 is my favourite so far mainly due to how the phonecall plays out, so you can understand how lackluster I find the interactions with the previous girl. Writing 4 ⭐: The story can be read properly despite being written here, full marks....that is what I would have said, but I have to say that the story would be better with permanent 3rd person pov. Updating stability 1⭐: Not much to say really. Look at the chapter content dates and judge yourself.
Sorry author but simply can’t keep promise to write review after chapter 40.Being inspired by other novel is great, however you almost copied the first few chapters will all the action included; it felft more like information dump than proper introduction to story. Early chapters lacks worldbuidling or emotions of MC, just some brief *thinking*. I personally think you went a little overboard with how the system works for MC. Almost perfect way to survive without doing much.Hope it gets better at later stages. Would love to see more review of peaople who are on ongoing chapters.
its a good novel destroyed by a sucky translator, dropped it at chapter 64 because of translation quality is low compared to the first 1 to 62 chapter then it become sucks, its also a paid chapter so why is the translation is bad, for the translator of 1 to 60 thank you for you workand the rest you SUCK and blue fairy your face SUCK YOU
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