Jacky0211
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One of the best novels I have ever read,keep it up ?.We need more of thsi.Thank you very much,really appreciate it.You have done a great job ?,if you keep am thsi good work.I assure you you’re on the right path to success
The story itself isn't bad but there seems to be a lot of forced interactions with the different characters that makes the story feel rigid. The MC "forgetting" that people are around when using his "secret" abilities is another problem with the story. Its really unfortunate because it kept me from truly getting attached to any characters since all interactions seemed out of place. An easy example is Connor the person he met during a raid that he "accidentally" showed his repair function to. Somehow Connor didn't even react and MC trusted that he wouldn't reveal his secrets and continued to reveal more of what he could do. The way he reacts to things just doesn't make much sense and it's rough having a dumb MC sometimes. There are also some inconsistencies early on with levels and the stats he gets per level but thats not as important if youre not looking to immerse yourself in the story. I will continue to read the story but as of now these are some pretty bad flaws.
This is a captivating revenge-driven romance about Eira, a young woman adamant about destroying her father's power. The author skillfully explores themes of justice, betrayal, and inner conflict, with Eira torn between her thirst for revenge and finding peace and moving on. This novel delivers strong emotional intensity and an engaging storyline for readers who enjoy suspense-filled, romance-infused dramas!
wow nice, please continue. aside from some minor plot hole, it's enjoyable
I like the apocalyptic theme of the book
I'm on chapter 61 so far the novel and very good at the beginning it was hard to read because the MC was very stupid but in chapter 57 it was explained. I don't care if there is a harem plus the protagonist, he must love them
An extremely good read with high potential. the main character is cruel and smart. The story starts out great, the main character has unusual ideas like an information guild.
This novel is really great! And this Author is my first, so of course I'm his fan!anyway I don't have much to say because Im too lazy to write a descriptive review, but heres the thing.character development is actually great from the start, and I believe author will do the harem right and correct unlike many harem works; theres's legit a whole ahh chapter about the first woman and how she fell in love with mcalso this novel isnt for cucks, nor for eunuchs aka. non harem lovers/harem haters.
I kind of understand Cass, but still, what she did was bad. I just hope that she won't regret it in the end. As for Theo, I have a very bad feeling about him. I hope I'm wrong though
I like the unforgiving and dark feel to the world and also that the author doesn't shy away from using gore but doesn't go overboard, cause the scenes are vivid but not edgy.
Meh.
