The story is about a man who transmigrate to another world while acquiring a game system that aids him in founding a sect.is not a bad story, it has some potential, but it has a copy paste idea about all other stories that describe sects which nothing new or innovated. I tried to like it, however it feels rush somehow, as well as The character is not relatable for me, world background need some more details.However, I encourage the author to continue for as you gain more experience in your writing future stories will benefit from it.Good Luck!
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Ahh, the original sign in novel, the Sign in Buddha Palm... Even when Webnovel just change the title to cheat those would willing spend money in this audacity.... If I can vote negative, I would...
best novel ever a different feel to it not your regular face slapping just antagonists and good sect dynamics introduction to different worlds enriches the world building and provide ample crises to mc
The author is not an ordinary one....he has above average writing skills and writings. Also what I liked the most was his concept and Idea which has huge potential. The plot is niche and some moments made me feel my emotions in which I didn't feel for a moment in reading novels. Also, my only advice is to show more than tell. Other than that, well you are good to go! hehe
Its a really good story with great potential. The only problem is update frequency is very low. Hun? There are more characters needed? Fine!
This dude just describes the girls way to much qw***************weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Writing quality 5/5 - no complaints here, its well written enough that i just read on with no problems at allStability of updates 4/5 - good daily updates with some days for restStory development 4/5 - it has been done before, time travel/revenge/vrmmorpg trope but this looks fairly well thought out and im looking forward because it has the potential to be one of those long running webnovelsCharacter design 4/5 - good characters, while i still havent seen a character i hate or love, and its still early on, the way the npc's and character talks are great, there are some villainous character early on that seem generic but well see later on if that changesWorld background - oh, good old earth with advanced tech(basically the future) with a widespread vrmmorpg game that is newly launched, as well as a very develop game system which i applaud the author for.got high views for this novel as im a fan of the genre, but for some they might see this as some copycat because it has been done a lot before, there are two famous KR ones, as well as a few chinese novels this story was based on. but im liking it because its not a translated work, but an honest to god english webnovel....added to library
To be honest I expected this story to be terrible or for the grammar and plot to be all over the place. And for that I do apologize I did not expect for it to be a hidden gem. As of chapter 9 where you have written up to for us readers to enjoy the story is flowing very smoothly and while there are a lot of cliches, they are put in such a way that even though we know them they are actually enjoyable to read. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you if you are serious about this story and don't drop it or start to rush your chapters and give us half baked nonsense. Then this is looking to be a new favorite of mine. I saw you had no reviews and since I've never reviewed a story I thought hey why not do a first for the both of us. You have a great story here and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Have fun and for anyone reading this I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.
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This novel has class and race levels instead of regular-ass levels. Stats aren't also immediately hovering at the 200-300 points, either. It actually feels like a proper progression novel this time. I like it.