Garbage, in general this book just sucks, the logic of this book is stupid. Do not recommend reading
The first few are good, but around the 100s, it started to go downhill, which I don't think I'm the only one noticed. I'm even questioning if this is an IDOL show or a life and death game? Because it wasn't giving an idol show, it's giving death and schemes. I did expect there's gonna be some action scenes because he's apparently a "gangster," but wth is this. You should have upgraded him into an assassin for the scenario to fit better. And wth is with the villains? Can't there be one villain at a time? Because they're too many, like a cockroach. All of their character design is also shallow and ridiculous. For the main character, I think he hit his head and thinks he's a gangster in his past life. Because he doesn't act, look like, and think like a right-hand man of a gang leader. He's acting innocent, naive, and a saint. He's probably lucky he survived that long if he is not delusional that he's an ex gangster. For his so-called "friends" in show? They're bs. Their actions is really a red flag, especially when only one of them stood for the MC (during the Choi incident) after what they all went through. I would immediately drop friends like that. Those kind of people are not worth your time, efforts and feelings. I'm not only talking about fictional but real life, baby. This is an advice.And, this novel probably contained more drama than the televisions my mom watched. Like, wth. This is a SURVIVAL show. What are we doing with this drama? It just doesn't match up. I'm already exhausted with all the drama happening.Overall, this is not a good read for me. For a more detailed review, I suggest reading RealBanana19's review. It's comprehensive and detailed, and I quite agree with her/his views. I also suggest the author read that review as it can make the novel better.
What can I say this novel is way to good and fun I am love it keep up the good work author kun
This is the same novel as the previous trial novel that didn't even selected!downvote for this novel!gg webnovel!#notgonnasupoortthisnovel
My first Novel on this app.Not cringe, good plot but average writing skills. Maybe the writter is still learning at the beggining and will get better after a few chapters.
It has become one of my favorite stories, everything is very well built, the rhythm is quite fluid, it does not delay too much like in other stories.
I dont even know where to begin. It starts fairly well. Even with all the cliches it was still good and palatable. But as time went on, the MC became more and more unbearable. He starts out a cunning smart guy, but by chapter 80 he is an idiot and constantly scared of everything. It is disappointing to see him become that way for the sake of comedy. At least, I hope it was comedy, because if it wasnt then it was straight up atrocious.
I like this novel a lot, intrigued storyline, interesting world. A bit slow character development but still good. Can't wait next chapter ...
It's well written, but the MC is an idiot (Mother is lying on the sofa with heavy dark circles under her eyes, sweating with a tired appearance two red snakebite marks on her neck... Thought of MC: "She's tired but okay, I won't bother her."), asking stupid questions of the system (What is a meditation room for?), making stupid mistakes (Without any strength wanting to travel the world through a portal where beasts, monsters and demons live, for the same reasons, leaving the house at night to investigate a figure he saw and going carelessly towards 2 suspicious people arguing in the dark, to make worse 2 powerful people.) and showing a brave and confident front to the point of hitting anyone who offends his store, but then he shakes in fear, freezes and gets beaten by someone who is weaker than him (the fat one had 5 stars, he had 5 fire plus 2 or 3 other elements), the system explains the most obvious things possible, which I would think normal if he explained everything or almost everything, but there are many things that are not explained as to why or how, and the MC just does it as if he already knows but doesn't know why (like the price of the store's servicesor how they work, how the system doesn't take anything from the money that customers pay "it all goes to the MC
Other than some spelling and grammer mistakes this novel is one of the best novel for a light read. Dont want to add spoilers to spoil the fun and can only say that you will not regret it
At first it was a very promising and good story with a lot of new concepts like ghost and a completely new spectral race introduced in another world of fantasy . Though it was lacking ghostly stuff while mc was balancing his physical attributes ( which is not ghostly ) it was acceptable . I reluctantly accept mc was unable to detach from a mere soul fragment even though he is a soul creature, a totally new soul type race in that world ( seriously? ) .But I lost all interest when the male transmigrator from earth fused with the soul fragment of a female from another world turning into a fusion of male/female or brosis taking care of the dead female's sister !? a man who didn't want the hassle of puberty fused his soul with strange otherworldly girl foregoing his individualty so easily ? As the male mc died in fusion ( r i.p ) I stopped reading.....
One of the funniest here. I really hope it’s gonna get picked. Charcters have great potemtial for developmeny and the plot seems to be original too!