Akkuzz_69
Pretty disappointing. There are quite a few glaringly obvious flaws with this novel. First off, everything works out way to well for the mc. He gets saved by a really powerful group who realistically would not give a rats ass about him and gives him a cultivation technique suited for him (because he cannot learn other without meridians). He gets a super common technique for cultivations that everyone can get their hands on for themselves, all their cousins, AND their dogs and finds it is an incomplete technique that even in its first stages of unlocking is better than all other technique out there. All while not even 1 person in the hundreds, if not thousands, of years has thought maybe I should see how far this technique can go. And this only is in the first few chapters, it still just as bad, but uses that technique as a main reason for it working.Secondly, the whole story is about how it is dangerous to be a wisp in a cultivation world because everyone want to use you for resources, but no out of 120 or so chapters there is only 2 times anyone has even considered using them as resources for cultivation. Every character you meet is either strictly good or strictly bad, and most of the time everyone is they meet are good people.
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This book is I don't know what to say other than average cliche and done a million times with a different occupation- but the problem is the author seemingly can't say names and so every character Non-han is 'Ethnic Minority #1-#2, etc' And to top it off its filled with racist remarks and annoying mid paragraph character thoughts that seemingly want to get to the end of the chapter so you then read the next chapter. I'm pretty sure this will go Premium at an insanely high price but it's not worth it. It's trying to be IRAS but doesn't come close and this book causes mere shame upon the Zhang Family.
main character starts becoming cool... then he duplicates himself now we hav multiple MC's.... lame. This way author dosent have to pick who MC interacts with in the MCU he can just have the MC interact with everyone.
All in all, this novel seems pretty generic when placed among similar novels of the same genre. Nonetheless, it's a nice way to kill time.One very giant peeve that I had while reading was that almost every single damn conflict was due to the opponent thinking with their dick and being envious of the MC having such a beautiful companion. When the MC proceeds to beat them up, they apparently always have a high ranking brother/cousin/uncle/whatever to 'avenge' them. You see where I'm going here? This hasn't happened just once or twice, but EVERY time the MC has solved the previous one, the next randomly pops up. So damn annoying. It's so damn forced. Even the chance encounter with the damn girl in the first place was forced af. Randomly chancing upon a girl with peerless features and talent in a small town probably not even on the map? Come on.
I don't want this story to be abandoned. please update
Great book
nice story
very intruding..keep up the good work author
Begitu baca yg versi inggrisnya. Kayak lagi nonton twilligh.
So so interesting and intriguing. Kudos to the author. I can't wait to find out how Ava ends up with the masked man.
When is this novel going to end. It's really getting dragged.
