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Hey mr Ts, i just came on webnovel and tried my luck by searching this novels name because i couldn t even finish 1 paragraph with mtl. Thank you for putting this hear i really appreciate it. Just from the first sentence i can see that it’s understandable. Thank you and here to your first review ?
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This story is absolutely garbage.The mc was super dumb. The system was punishing type, it also mocked mc when it has a chance too.I couldn't make it pass 5th chapter.
Wow your writing is amazing ??This story is soo good please keep writing so that I could read its all parts I am feeling so happy ?because of this story it is proved love is unconditional ?Thank you Keep writing ✍???
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The character being dark skin made this novel trash no cap
5Star because why not.. is what i would like to say but its a promising novel in making and it has quite interesting concept. Writing quality will be improving as the author is just a newb
been reading this novel 3× and it's really, really good, except some minor grammars all in all it's A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.specially the a father in marvel, I hope you continue that story, I'm a fan of marvel that's why and your plots and theme are amazing making me wanting more.
the novel is interesting, but the mc is a little dumb. He's literally in a tournament, with his enemy held by the throat. And instead of killing her, he simply waste time talking, until she kicked his balls and fled.and in the chapter 50 +/- the side chapters begin to get more frequents.
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Amazing novel author keep it up but we need update as soon as possible so please update it always cause we are waiting for it please......................
